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Comment from BethShelby
There is a lot happening in this chapter. It's sounds as thought everyone involved plus everyone they are close to are in danger. Your writing is very interesting and I don't mind the length. It reads smoothly and holds my interest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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There is a lot happening in this chapter. It's sounds as thought everyone involved plus everyone they are close to are in danger. Your writing is very interesting and I don't mind the length. It reads smoothly and holds my interest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story and the plot is thickening. It doesn't good for any of them at the moment.
Just one small thing: Bill put hand over hers.= Bill put his hand over hers.
What is to happen next? Ulla xx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story and the plot is thickening. It doesn't good for any of them at the moment.
Just one small thing: Bill put hand over hers.= Bill put his hand over hers.
What is to happen next? Ulla xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and the catch. I had added the missing word.
Comment from Aaron Rodenburg
I enjoyed it a lot. However, I was getting confused by the pronoun usage in the throughout... probably because it's in the middle of a novel...thank you for your work, keep it up!
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed it a lot. However, I was getting confused by the pronoun usage in the throughout... probably because it's in the middle of a novel...thank you for your work, keep it up!
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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I am sure your confusion is because you're just stepping in. If anybody else complains, I will take another look.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
He says his gut tells him, he will." (omit comma)
Congrats on publishing another one!. I like Shana's Quandry, more mysterious sounding. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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He says his gut tells him, he will." (omit comma)
Congrats on publishing another one!. I like Shana's Quandry, more mysterious sounding. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the suggestion and the kind review. I have omitted the comma.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Superb! I don't think that Mac will finish making that reservation for Logan, though, he's in it for the however long it takes now. What wallies! Do they really think they can frighten Logan, a military man? I do feel so sorry for Mac, though, all she wants to do is find the murderer of Logan's sister, but there seems to be more in this than she realised. Well done, Barb, this is a great chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Superb! I don't think that Mac will finish making that reservation for Logan, though, he's in it for the however long it takes now. What wallies! Do they really think they can frighten Logan, a military man? I do feel so sorry for Mac, though, all she wants to do is find the murderer of Logan's sister, but there seems to be more in this than she realised. Well done, Barb, this is a great chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from royowen
So now Logan's received a letter from someone, threatening him to leave, but somehow I don't don't he will, and McKenzie makes a move to make a plane reservation, somehow I don't think he'll take. Things are really hotting up now. Beautifully written, I think they must be getting close. Excellent Job Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : Are you(r) Major Logan Nelson? 2: I don't have (a) choice, do I?
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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So now Logan's received a letter from someone, threatening him to leave, but somehow I don't don't he will, and McKenzie makes a move to make a plane reservation, somehow I don't think he'll take. Things are really hotting up now. Beautifully written, I think they must be getting close. Excellent Job Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : Are you(r) Major Logan Nelson? 2: I don't have (a) choice, do I?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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I have made both corrections. Thank you for the wonderful review.
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Bless you Barbara.
