Hell's Bells
Who do you serve?30 total reviews
Comment from LaRosa
Wish the sound on my computer worked. I'd have enjoyed the memory.
The story is short and to the point which makes it work well. I think that the poem at the end really flavors the whole of your point.
For me, the filler information was unnecessary as you made a simple straight forward comment that was believable using the poem at the end to spice it up.
That was effective for sure!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Wish the sound on my computer worked. I'd have enjoyed the memory.
The story is short and to the point which makes it work well. I think that the poem at the end really flavors the whole of your point.
For me, the filler information was unnecessary as you made a simple straight forward comment that was believable using the poem at the end to spice it up.
That was effective for sure!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear LaRosa. I really appreciate your time and thoughts.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally xoxo
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I'm always grateful, Sally. Thank you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Good job as usual, Sally. I had no idea about the abortion legislation being slipped into the relief bill that Congress is having such a hard time passing. I'm tired. I actually thought this was an issue that Congress could agree on and get something accomplished.
I try not to think of the virus as the devil's work, but it certainly does lend itself to that interpretation.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Good job as usual, Sally. I had no idea about the abortion legislation being slipped into the relief bill that Congress is having such a hard time passing. I'm tired. I actually thought this was an issue that Congress could agree on and get something accomplished.
I try not to think of the virus as the devil's work, but it certainly does lend itself to that interpretation.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear Debbie. I'm glad you liked my horror/satire. What going on is truly horrible. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from poetwatch
I serve My God and His Son my Lord Jesus Christ, Sally. :) I speak with them every day and have felt their smile as well as their disapproval. Yet, I see the evil in this world of ours and it will come to an end. Those demons in your story were angels once, beings not of this earth. Aliens, I believe. :) This is a good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I serve My God and His Son my Lord Jesus Christ, Sally. :) I speak with them every day and have felt their smile as well as their disapproval. Yet, I see the evil in this world of ours and it will come to an end. Those demons in your story were angels once, beings not of this earth. Aliens, I believe. :) This is a good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear poet. I know we share the same values and faith. I appreciate the wonderful review and support. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Joan E.
You certainly let your imagination run wild during this pandemic. I admired your use of dialog and your dramatic storytelling. Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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You certainly let your imagination run wild during this pandemic. I admired your use of dialog and your dramatic storytelling. Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I have a fine and active imagination. I didn't win, but I think it's because it was a bit political. That's okay, though. I had many good conversations with this one. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from BeasPeas
You are right on the money with this, Sally. Your author's note and poem are well done. Politics cannot be put aside even in a crisis. We need a clean bill, one not padded with other agendas. Still they fight for power. A terrible thing. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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You are right on the money with this, Sally. Your author's note and poem are well done. Politics cannot be put aside even in a crisis. We need a clean bill, one not padded with other agendas. Still they fight for power. A terrible thing. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you again for the excellent review and insightful comments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from damommy
I'm with you. I'm trust in God to get us through this. He will step in when the time is right. How can anyone blame the President? This was done out of pure evil, releasing such a virus on the world.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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I'm with you. I'm trust in God to get us through this. He will step in when the time is right. How can anyone blame the President? This was done out of pure evil, releasing such a virus on the world.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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I agree, completely. This has the potential to wipe is out and liberal Congress is whining about their ridiculous stuff they want crammed into a bill to relieve human suffering. Period. They are so worried that someone might be helped that didn't vote for them. What a human travesty. It is crystal clear who they serve. Sending you my best today as,
Sal xo
Comment from royowen
This is so true, love this Bob Dylan song, when he was converted, I don't where he is now, but hopefully God has preserved him. There hasn't been a better time to serve up the gospel but now is the time to do it, wonderful job Sally, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is so true, love this Bob Dylan song, when he was converted, I don't where he is now, but hopefully God has preserved him. There hasn't been a better time to serve up the gospel but now is the time to do it, wonderful job Sally, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Roy. I'm so pleased.eased and honored you thought this thought provoking flash six worthy. The song came immediately to mind when I was writing this. I see clearly the false Gods behind these agendas. Jesus is life and love.
Sending you my best today as always with many thanks!!
Sal xo
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Well done
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a wonderfully powerful piece of work that lays the cards on the table. If only humanity would wake up and realize who they serve.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a wonderfully powerful piece of work that lays the cards on the table. If only humanity would wake up and realize who they serve.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear Rebecca. It is so appreciated. Yep, folks need to wise up. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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I love reading your writings. Keep up the good work!
Comment from Janetsue
This is a super Flash Fiction entry, Sally. The mood and truth behind the liens is a situation we should be aware of since it is spread worldwide. Thank you so much for the uplift. Laughter is a great healer! xo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a super Flash Fiction entry, Sally. The mood and truth behind the liens is a situation we should be aware of since it is spread worldwide. Thank you so much for the uplift. Laughter is a great healer! xo
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you dear Janet. I'm glad you enjoyed my horror/satire. I think it's a little bit of both. I appreciate the review and insight, too. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from country ranch writer
Demons of the world want us o fail so they can sweep in and take all the credit for all the mistakes they have made and used against its in our plight to find salvation.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Demons of the world want us o fail so they can sweep in and take all the credit for all the mistakes they have made and used against its in our plight to find salvation.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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All in three lines. Just enter the above in a dribble flash and you have a winner! So glad to see youmamd I appreciate the greatmreciew. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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