Gently Elegant
a-b-c of love...15 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Lisamay, a TGIFriday to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, it was well crafted, it seems I have some stiff competition in this contest. Good job and good luck.
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Hello Lisamay, a TGIFriday to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, it was well crafted, it seems I have some stiff competition in this contest. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very pretty poem. Swans are so elegant. We have a big park near us and there are 4 swans walking around freely. No fence or anything, They have been there for 12 years. Beautiful to watch them.
The picture is beautiful by the way!
Luv!
Patty
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A very pretty poem. Swans are so elegant. We have a big park near us and there are 4 swans walking around freely. No fence or anything, They have been there for 12 years. Beautiful to watch them.
The picture is beautiful by the way!
Luv!
Patty
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This piece uses an excellent choice of words to complement the image. Just for information, in England UK all swans belong to the king or queen, so you might read "royal bond" rather than "loyal bond".
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This piece uses an excellent choice of words to complement the image. Just for information, in England UK all swans belong to the king or queen, so you might read "royal bond" rather than "loyal bond".
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
A comment on the mute swan's predilection to mate for life without saying so in so many words. I really love the wealth of consonance in this sort piece, and the central word, 'intertwinement' is brilliant. I wish I still had a six.
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A comment on the mute swan's predilection to mate for life without saying so in so many words. I really love the wealth of consonance in this sort piece, and the central word, 'intertwinement' is brilliant. I wish I still had a six.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I see these swans in the summer in Beacon park and they are a joy to watch as they tend to their young, you brought the memory here Lisa, love Dolly x
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I see these swans in the summer in Beacon park and they are a joy to watch as they tend to their young, you brought the memory here Lisa, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2020