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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb, I must say you are making your way to make Logan and McKenzie are on the right path to find Megan's
killer. Smiles to you making Logan and Mckenzie getting more romantic.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Hello Barb, I must say you are making your way to make Logan and McKenzie are on the right path to find Megan's
killer. Smiles to you making Logan and Mckenzie getting more romantic.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome, Barb
Gert
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from judiverse
A pleasure to read. Mac and Logan think they're being shadowed by someone other than the expected shadows. It sounds like something deep is going on. The security camera tape from the night Mac was drugged was interesting, but she can't identify the two men. There's another figure they can't identify either. They're wondering if it's Sidney's work, and are careful to preserve what's on the tape. Interesting scent at the "gentlemen's" club. I can't see that Whitmore has anything to do with the murder although his behavior is strange. I'll wait and see what develops. I'm suspecting everyone right now! Fun bit about whether the chair at the club if safe to sit on. Neat bit about ordering the pizza, too. That is the logical thing to do. judi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A pleasure to read. Mac and Logan think they're being shadowed by someone other than the expected shadows. It sounds like something deep is going on. The security camera tape from the night Mac was drugged was interesting, but she can't identify the two men. There's another figure they can't identify either. They're wondering if it's Sidney's work, and are careful to preserve what's on the tape. Interesting scent at the "gentlemen's" club. I can't see that Whitmore has anything to do with the murder although his behavior is strange. I'll wait and see what develops. I'm suspecting everyone right now! Fun bit about whether the chair at the club if safe to sit on. Neat bit about ordering the pizza, too. That is the logical thing to do. judi
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I would have ordered pizza. LOL
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You're welcome. I just got your book "Under Siege at the Rockin A on Amazon. I have Kindle Unlimited so I get to read it for free! judi
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If your like it, would you please write a review?
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I was at a program today, but I should have time Wednesday and Thursday to work on it. I'll be happy to write a review. (I use the name Francis Factor for reviews on Amazon. judi
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was a great continuation to the story. So they're on the track of who were chasing Mckenzie and probably still are. But, meanwhile, it's time for a pizza. Logan is the perfect gentleman as ever. About time, she wakes up to the fact. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hi Barbara, this was a great continuation to the story. So they're on the track of who were chasing Mckenzie and probably still are. But, meanwhile, it's time for a pizza. Logan is the perfect gentleman as ever. About time, she wakes up to the fact. Ulla xx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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McKenzie isn't sure of herself when it comes to men. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this chapter very much. You really no how to keep it interesting. You dialog is very smooth. The romance between these too seems to be developing nicly. I look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. You really no how to keep it interesting. You dialog is very smooth. The romance between these too seems to be developing nicly. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent episode Barbara, the trail is getting hotter by the minute and the video tape is proving to be very handy indeed. They go to the nightclub where a guy called Leon Whitmore, and according to the dancers can't really "perform" the plot is getting closer to getting answers, well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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This is an excellent episode Barbara, the trail is getting hotter by the minute and the video tape is proving to be very handy indeed. They go to the nightclub where a guy called Leon Whitmore, and according to the dancers can't really "perform" the plot is getting closer to getting answers, well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sounds like another good chapter in your story dealing with the adventures of the two main characters. Action had a good flow and was believable. Looking forward to the next chapter. Now I want some pizza. Bill
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Sounds like another good chapter in your story dealing with the adventures of the two main characters. Action had a good flow and was believable. Looking forward to the next chapter. Now I want some pizza. Bill
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
