The Piper
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Comment from royowen
I just loved this, mainly because I cast my mind back to my daughters learning to play, the elder is that sort of musician that Piper is, but has had distractions since studying for her degree, and the younger has the same talent, but quit in high school, beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I just loved this, mainly because I cast my mind back to my daughters learning to play, the elder is that sort of musician that Piper is, but has had distractions since studying for her degree, and the younger has the same talent, but quit in high school, beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Roy,
It is so good to hear your daughters play and are so good at it. I'm glad at least one stuck with it. Thanks for the encouraging comments about the writing.
Debi
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Well done
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is an interesting story. I think this is the first chapter I have read of it. I like the characters you created and the dialogue is excellent. I did not see anything to make any suggestions. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This is an interesting story. I think this is the first chapter I have read of it. I like the characters you created and the dialogue is excellent. I did not see anything to make any suggestions. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Shirley,
I appreciate the kind comments and am happy to hear you found the story interesting.
Debi
Comment from May 1
Shouldn't it say veranda? Yes, it does make sense that he concentrates on music so much that he doesn't notice anything else. That's a good point, kill multiple birds with one stone. :) Lady Spring sounds awesome. All in all, another great chapter. :)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Shouldn't it say veranda? Yes, it does make sense that he concentrates on music so much that he doesn't notice anything else. That's a good point, kill multiple birds with one stone. :) Lady Spring sounds awesome. All in all, another great chapter. :)
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi May 1,
You are so right, it should say 'veranda.' I corrected it. Thanks for catching the misspelling and letting me know.
I appreciate your analysis and the encouraging comments. I am glad you like Lady Spring.
Debi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderful!! And leaving us hanging at just the point that we don't get the 'bee details' (LOL!) but such a lovely saga... I can just picture Lady Spring (sure you probably gave a definition in the parts I missed, but I missed 'em - lol!) as she flows rather out with the tray.... and, oh, the birds and their reaction to the music! I just loved the heck out of this one, W.J. -- perfect! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Wonderful!! And leaving us hanging at just the point that we don't get the 'bee details' (LOL!) but such a lovely saga... I can just picture Lady Spring (sure you probably gave a definition in the parts I missed, but I missed 'em - lol!) as she flows rather out with the tray.... and, oh, the birds and their reaction to the music! I just loved the heck out of this one, W.J. -- perfect! :) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Yvette,
Thank you for the beautiful six star rating. I appreciate the encouraging comment about the writing, too. It is great to hear enjoyed this chapter.
Debi
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You are so welcome, my lady! ;) And thank you for Piper and your pen's fantastical 'escape from it all' - lol! ;)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I need to understand you(r) capabilities. It sounds like Piper has arrived to where he is supposed to be. His music will only get better with such teachers to guide him. His music is so sweet the birds atop to listen. I wonder if the Mocking Bird could copy his music. Well done Debi.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I need to understand you(r) capabilities. It sounds like Piper has arrived to where he is supposed to be. His music will only get better with such teachers to guide him. His music is so sweet the birds atop to listen. I wonder if the Mocking Bird could copy his music. Well done Debi.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Nancy,
Thank you for catching the typo. I appreciate the analysis of the chapter. Great question about the Mocking Bird. Thank you for the encouragement.
Debi
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like the chapter about your fantasy world of different creatures with their unique personalities and interactions. I like how the music communicates to the birds and insects. Excellent creativity. Bill
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I like the chapter about your fantasy world of different creatures with their unique personalities and interactions. I like how the music communicates to the birds and insects. Excellent creativity. Bill
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Bill,
Thank you for the kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Debi
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi it is lovely reading this story, some I remember, some I do not, but still fresh descending with so much ease. As I must have said befor, I loved the conversations more. To the point and beautifully structured.
Benny Beeharry
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi it is lovely reading this story, some I remember, some I do not, but still fresh descending with so much ease. As I must have said befor, I loved the conversations more. To the point and beautifully structured.
Benny Beeharry
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Benny Beeharry,
Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. I am glad you like the dialogue. I appreciate you stopping to read and review.
Debi