Waiting in the Weeds
Sometimes it feels like our dreams have been put on hold!35 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, I agree--in His time is a great way of saying we must wait. I enjoyed your rhyming contest entry. You make several valid points. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Yes, I agree--in His time is a great way of saying we must wait. I enjoyed your rhyming contest entry. You make several valid points. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dr. Nad
I noticed your rhyming has no set rhyming patter, but the structure of and wording has a way for me to read your poem over and over.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello Dr. Nad
I noticed your rhyming has no set rhyming patter, but the structure of and wording has a way for me to read your poem over and over.
Gert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
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You are welcome DR. Nad
Comment from JP Writer
Nice, Dr. Nad. Structure is good, the rhymes work, and I like that you set this up by stating a problem in verse 1, develop it in verse 2 and suggest an answer in verse 3. The words in all caps don't work for me... they seem to try to force a rhythm that the syllables pretty much accomplish on their own. Keep writing, you have a nice style. I really like the photo you chose... it matches your message quite well.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Nice, Dr. Nad. Structure is good, the rhymes work, and I like that you set this up by stating a problem in verse 1, develop it in verse 2 and suggest an answer in verse 3. The words in all caps don't work for me... they seem to try to force a rhythm that the syllables pretty much accomplish on their own. Keep writing, you have a nice style. I really like the photo you chose... it matches your message quite well.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Alchera
Three well written irregular rhymed versification structural stanzas and beautifully narrated throughout its longed life's religious doubted questionaire. The answer, my friend, is still blowing in the Wind as we all know.
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Three well written irregular rhymed versification structural stanzas and beautifully narrated throughout its longed life's religious doubted questionaire. The answer, my friend, is still blowing in the Wind as we all know.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
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Always welcome!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is an excellent way of viewing life. My life is so drastically different than I thought it would be, due to unexpected circumstances in my life. Large ones. It took awhile for me to decide that God has a plan for me, although I have absolutely no idea what it is. I have to wait. Thanks for affirming that. Great writing. Great image. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is an excellent way of viewing life. My life is so drastically different than I thought it would be, due to unexpected circumstances in my life. Large ones. It took awhile for me to decide that God has a plan for me, although I have absolutely no idea what it is. I have to wait. Thanks for affirming that. Great writing. Great image. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
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I don?t know how old you are, but you are not too old if you think the way you write!
Comment from Mr.write_4u
I really enjoyed reading this one. The tempo read so smoothly, the rhymes were right on. I wish you luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I really enjoyed reading this one. The tempo read so smoothly, the rhymes were right on. I wish you luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Sally Law
This is wonderful, Dr. Nad. I'm waiting on God for many things right now as doors of opportunity have opened for me. I think we can all relate to this, feeling permanently affixed to the ground. Your chosen artwork is the perfect illustration. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is wonderful, Dr. Nad. I'm waiting on God for many things right now as doors of opportunity have opened for me. I think we can all relate to this, feeling permanently affixed to the ground. Your chosen artwork is the perfect illustration. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Dr. Nad, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. It was an enjoyable read. I liked the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello Dr. Nad, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. It was an enjoyable read. I liked the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn't done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Gideon300
Really nice wording, rhyme and message. I think experiences teach you how to wait. Youth is eager, but maturity is wise. I love reading this, it makes me reflect on my own journey and the inspirational stories that help me develop my trust and my own "wait".
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Really nice wording, rhyme and message. I think experiences teach you how to wait. Youth is eager, but maturity is wise. I love reading this, it makes me reflect on my own journey and the inspirational stories that help me develop my trust and my own "wait".
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
For me, it's hard to be patient. It seems that you aim to wait for God's guidance. The poem has a pleasant meter and rhyme. It flows well.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
For me, it's hard to be patient. It seems that you aim to wait for God's guidance. The poem has a pleasant meter and rhyme. It flows well.
Gypsy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.