Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

Hi Christine,
You wrote a very romantic poem for your twenty syllable contest entry. You have every thing a Valentine's poem needs to be romantic. Chocolate, wine, the hugs and the promise of love tonight.
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Lu, Thanks very much for your review and hope the committee think so LOL A challenger that was fun Cheers Chris PS Nice to hear from you hope all is well

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Chris,

Ahhhh... yeah, you're easy and predictable. hahahaha Just like the rest of us. I mean, what girl doesn't love all that stuff, right ?

This poem is cute. The syllable count is just right and I think you should have a great chance in a top spot. Thanks for the smile and good luck!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Robyn LOL yes very easy and predictable, but hey what else do you want for Valentine's day. A bit of cheeky fun from me We shall see Ha Ha, Chees Chris

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Valentine you're mine;
Roses, choc'late, wine.
Kisses, hug me tight,
I'll be yours tonight.

In 20 syllable you told a whole story and rhymed all the lines. Excellently done

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Barb, Thanks and I am pleased you thought it excellent I enjoy these challenges and hey one never knows Ha ha Cheers Chris

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Your Valentine poem contest entry is very pretty. Great presentation. The syllable count is right. Good job and good luckð???

Gypsy ð???

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Gypsy (Marvel) Thanks very much, we shall see Ha ha a bit of fun with this one Cheers Chris (Perhaps I should have done a Haiku. I think I Know how to write them, had a good teacher a while ago LOL Cheers Chris

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 15-Feb-2020

You are welcome :)

Gypsy

Comment from playinaround

Excellent

Nicely done. Romantic, a great presentation. I love it. There is nothing that I would change. Such and beautiful valentine wish. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi playinaround, nice to meet you and thanks for your review I am so glad you liked it as is I enjoyed putting it into 20 syllables Cheers Christine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written twenty syllable Valentine's poem about the desired eats and drinks as well as some flowers to seal the deal with chocolates and wine for the special girl.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Sandra, Thanks for your review and packed a lot into 20 syllables LOl Hope you had a nice one too Cheers Chrtis

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A romantic evening all set up and waiting to happen on Valentine's night here Christine and I hope it all goes well, you set the scene for romance here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Dolly, Exactly glad you saw my hidden meaning LOL A bit of cheeky fun with this one .Cheers Chris

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well you hit all the right sweet thangs for Valentine's Day, Chris. I always get a charge out of those cards and this is just a delight.

Twenty syllables of scrumptious sweets in celebration of FanStory's twenty years here.

Just a couple of typos

Valentine your (you're) mine
I'll be your's (yours) tonight.

All the best to you with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Hi Gloria Thanks so much I am so glad I have FS friends like you to keep me honest LOL Sometimes I miss obvious things and did wonder about the Your?s should have gone with mt instinct but completely missed the You ?re . you are great to help me out All the best and I hope you get some Chockies Xx Chris

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation, Chris.
-The syllable count is good.
-Very good rhyme and meter.
-The imagery is effective
with "Roses, choc'late, wine."
-That sounds good to me!
-A very nice Valentine's love poem.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Pam, Thanks for reviewing my poem for Valentine's day It was fun trying to put it into 20 syllables yet making it effective Ha ha Cheers for your good luck We will see. Chris

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Feb-2020

You are very welcome, Chris. I'll take some of that chocolate, if you have any left!

Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry

Excellent

Really really nice Valentine poem! The 2nd line is very attractive to the recipient! I like the emphasis on red in your art choice and your font. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Hi Marilyn, Thanks for reading my poem and yes that's the best one LOL plenty of them also. I thought the red matched the words and image nicely Cheers Chris