Comment from royowen

Excellent

I would love to be able to review you short form poem, but I'm afraid I'm not able to, because I'm not able to see it. Perhaps you should a different background, as the judges won't be able to read it either. Good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thanks a lot Roy, and you are the second one to (not) see the poem because of the wrong background color. I'll try to rectify that.

reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2020

Bless you

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Good

I like the blinding black (albeit your text---lost against the camouflaging grey--would be better served on black.) Dearest daughter is an overused expression--perhaps something fresher? Interesting use of incomprehensive! Cheers. LIZ

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thanks, Liz, for your most appreciated comment and advise. Will the text come out in white when I use black as background? I wasn't sure about that.
Have to think of another entry instead of dearest daughter; I think you are right.

Comment from Wendy Winter

Exceptional

Wow. Ive recently lost a Son so this gave me goosebumps. The danger of loving is the risk of loss. Yet we still love and love in honor of them. Thanks for sharing your beautifully chosen words.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Wendy, this is a wonderful surprise for me. The first comment a 6 star one! Thank you very much for understanding the poem so well.