An Elmer's Kind of Love
now that's true love17 total reviews
Comment from Therese Caron
What a cute and actually very romantic valentine! Adorable picture - the school glue makes it -and I love the heart. Your play on words is great. Good luck in the contest!
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What a cute and actually very romantic valentine! Adorable picture - the school glue makes it -and I love the heart. Your play on words is great. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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thanks so much, Therese! for your comments and good wishes.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Great 15 syllable poem. I liked your theme of using Elmer's Glue.
I thought you used your words in perfect harmony with the thoughts you put on paper. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
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Great 15 syllable poem. I liked your theme of using Elmer's Glue.
I thought you used your words in perfect harmony with the thoughts you put on paper. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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thank you so much.
Your kind words are appreciated!
pome lover
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is ingenious: your matching artwork and verse for this contest entry.
You may add some pizazz to your overall presentation if you change the text color to red for this Valentine Day poem.
Mark
P.S. One minor edit suggestion for your capitalization. Since you used comma and period, consider making 'In' into lowercase and add a period after 'weather.'
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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This is ingenious: your matching artwork and verse for this contest entry.
You may add some pizazz to your overall presentation if you change the text color to red for this Valentine Day poem.
Mark
P.S. One minor edit suggestion for your capitalization. Since you used comma and period, consider making 'In' into lowercase and add a period after 'weather.'
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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thank you so much. will do as you suggest, sir
and I appreciate the 6!!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Mark Valentine
How perfect is this? It marries that simple, pure, unadulterated, straight-from-the-heart, elementary school expression of affection, with the mature, lasting, been-through-it-all-together love.
This is simple, but so profound, cute, and poignant.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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How perfect is this? It marries that simple, pure, unadulterated, straight-from-the-heart, elementary school expression of affection, with the mature, lasting, been-through-it-all-together love.
This is simple, but so profound, cute, and poignant.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Bless you, Mark!
Thanks for all your neat comments and for the super six.
And Happy Valentine's to you!
katharine - pl
Comment from lyenochka
That's so cute! You made a clever use of all twenty syllables. You also bring us back to childhood remembering the joys of creating with Elmer's! Best wishes in the contest, Katharine!
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That's so cute! You made a clever use of all twenty syllables. You also bring us back to childhood remembering the joys of creating with Elmer's! Best wishes in the contest, Katharine!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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thank you very much!!!
K
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Bravo. Ditto to Elmer, who never lets us down. (Wouldn't we ladies all love his human counterpart. I could definitely use holding together at my age. Crisp and Clever. Cheers. LIZ
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Bravo. Ditto to Elmer, who never lets us down. (Wouldn't we ladies all love his human counterpart. I could definitely use holding together at my age. Crisp and Clever. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Yep, I could, too!
Thanks for your very kind words!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, my goodness gracious, Katharine... that is wonderful and humorous and full of love's commitment for those that aren't very 'sappy'!! ;):) How perfect is that?!! ;) Call up Hallmark and get Elmer's on-board cuz I think you could do a whole series of 'love's glue' offerings! ;) Thanx for sharing, LoneStar Lady, and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
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Oh, my goodness gracious, Katharine... that is wonderful and humorous and full of love's commitment for those that aren't very 'sappy'!! ;):) How perfect is that?!! ;) Call up Hallmark and get Elmer's on-board cuz I think you could do a whole series of 'love's glue' offerings! ;) Thanx for sharing, LoneStar Lady, and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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love's glue' offerings, huh? You are a whiz. what a T-whistlin' idea.
Thanks, madame for all your great comments!!
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