Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"The Dragons Coming Home"
Is another chapter in the book, "Aaron's Dragons."
It was well written and rich in Theme Imagery.
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It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thanks, Ricky. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Comment from Faith Tate

Excellent

You have a great way of drawing the reader in ! Makes us feel like we are in that moment ! Great with punctuation and very imaginative story! Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. The rest of the story is in my portfolio if you're interested.

Comment from Sallyo

Exceptional

I love the dragons! It feels as if the story is coming to an end fairly soon... but maybe you have a big push in mind? I do love some cooperation in fantasy! The wonderful Chicken...

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020

Thanks. I'm afraid Pink is going to be a bit disappointed when she sees what a chicken is. I do have something in mind for the end, and I may do something with Duane and some much bigger dragons in the near future.

reply by Sallyo on 09-Feb-2020

Oooh, good!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This was a fun chapter, Cindy. I'm thrilled the dragons were accepted by the people. It goes to show that most fear the unknown. But once that is explained, then common sense takes over. The dragons deserved their time of celebration just as that boy with the slingshot deserved his unique brand of punishment. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020

Thanks. I wouldn't want to be that boy. He'll never live it down. Glad you found it fun.

Comment from Aaron Milavec

Good

My favorite line:

The dragon he'd hit had taken his own unique brand of revenge, and along with his sister, punished him without really hurting him.

Honor your imagination,
Aaron

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.