Comment from Therese Caron

Excellent

Sometimes it is hard to believe the faith God puts in us, especially when we may not have earned it. Your last stanza, beginning with So I chose, explains this. Very well written poem. Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired the "vessel" metaphor in your splendid artwork and in your free verse. I think you are right that redemption starts with acknowledging our mistakes. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020

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Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

I enjoyed your piece very much. As I read it, it reminded me how it sounds so much like a Biblical Proverb. It was nicely done. A lot can be said about turning the things that bother us over to Him. If we could ever master that, think of the stress that could be lifted throughout the world.


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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020

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