Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"A Call to Arms"
Vote Trump out?

Is a Political 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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I do believe I saw on Facebook that the impeachment process has been temporarily seduced with a kick in the Democrats rear ends!
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I live in New Jersey here, and I believe in New Jersey...
There are 450 communities that don't work together.
Not as a whole but seperate Municipal workers inspectors judges police officers are costing too much money!
Yes, too Capitalistic!
And, we have the second highest taxes in the United States!
This is the reason I voted for Donald Trump Because he's got a good business sense and he can clean up the excess Federal mess of spending.
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In the past history of Democratic Presidents, the only one I've ever enjoyed was JFK .
Butt unfortunately, he was assassinated!
Most of the others were worthless losers.
I do believe though Richard Millhouse Nixon was a Democrat.
And, even though he was impeached with the Watergate episode.
He opened up the flood gates to China.
With foreign relations and trade.
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Donald Trump will be re-elected for four more years.
Why?
To do what he must after he basically had his hands being tied.
By the Democrats.
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The most Malinged President in U S.
History!
Why?
Because he's got a pair of balls and says what needs to be said!
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He does not take a nickel in salary from the people and wasn't just hired but elected!
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The only opposition?
The wife of a former President who couldn't even keep his dick in his pants while in office!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020

Doctor Ricky, thank you for the wonderful review. I especially appreciate your objectivity, given, that we are clearly at odds politically. Sorry for the delay in responding. I have been dealing with a family emergency.

I also appreciate and respect your commentary and hope you don't mind if I comment. I understand your dismay at the high taxes you pay in NJ. I can commiserate with you, as I am from NY and we also have one of the highest tax rates in the country, so I was quite pissed when Trump's tax "reform" capped the deductions for state and local taxes at $10,000. In addition, he eliminated the personal exemption, which particularly screwed me, since I have three children. The combination of those two resulted in me paying over $3,000 MORE in taxes last year. So much for EVERYONE getting a tax break. With tax season on the horizon, that is what I have to look forward to this year.

I also appreciate JFK, but keep in mind, he also couldn't keep his dick in his pants while in office.

Was Nixon REALLY a Democrat??? Actually, I think Clinton was really a Republican. After all, he reformed welfare, a totally Republican dream.

I don't know about Trump having his hands tied by Democrats. For the first two years, he had a Republican controlled Senate AND House. They could have passed any legislation they wanted. There was nothing stopping them.

Thanks again for the review, Ricky. I enjoyed chatting with you.

Thanks,
Bill

reply by Ricky1024 on 07-Feb-2020

Hey Bill.
Political affiliations in the United States today are vast.
We are two degrees socialistic society controlled by the capitalists.
got burned by the Democrats and Republicans who don't seem to know what's going on and take turns with their heads up their asses!
as you well know most politicians to some form are corrupt and have taken kickbacks to get them to themselves to where they are today

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Not sure what to say as I don't like to get involved with politics, but some want him out while others think he is doing some good.
Your short poem states what you think and that is all that matters. Freedom to chose.
Best wishes!
Drew

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

Drew, thanks for the kind review. You're so right, it is all about perspective - some want him out and some think he is doing some good.

For some middle class people like me with multiple children, they have paid thousands more in taxes, so he could give massive tax breaks to billionaires and corporations. That's what I look forward to as we enter into another tax season (last year I paid $3000 more in taxes).

Thanks again for reviewing.

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

A well defined political poem using 5-7-5 format.
You used your words well to describe your story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.


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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

Lil' Mormon Boy, thanks for the kind review and encouragement.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Great campaign add for the democratic party. Think I'll wait to see who is running against him before making that decision. Good luck in the contest! ;)

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

Thanks for the kind review and encouragement, Y.M.