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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I loved the new chapter and I also love the interaction between the two of them. But what is really going on? I think it's time that she stops paying hard to get. All has its limits. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi Barbara, I loved the new chapter and I also love the interaction between the two of them. But what is really going on? I think it's time that she stops paying hard to get. All has its limits. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Oh so true, maybe it will work out. LOL Thank you for the kind review. Please remember they have only known each other for 9 days.
Comment from royowen
Maybe Logan's got Mackenzie talking about here preference in a man, or maybe husband to be. Love the backdrop of the relationship, as I've said before, there's no sloppiness in your stories, and the final and inevitable commitment is usually at the last minute, and the heroine is a strong, self assured, (but not too much) but undeniably attracted to the man to be. Love this story Barbara, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Maybe Logan's got Mackenzie talking about here preference in a man, or maybe husband to be. Love the backdrop of the relationship, as I've said before, there's no sloppiness in your stories, and the final and inevitable commitment is usually at the last minute, and the heroine is a strong, self assured, (but not too much) but undeniably attracted to the man to be. Love this story Barbara, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Well done,
Comment from susand3022
Oh, Barbara... That's brutal! With Bill listening in? What on Earth were you thinking??? LOL, what a laugh riot... it's just too funny! I wonder what could ever have possessed Logan to ask that question now, of all times? Oh, man... talk about embarrassing! Hahahaha!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Oh, Barbara... That's brutal! With Bill listening in? What on Earth were you thinking??? LOL, what a laugh riot... it's just too funny! I wonder what could ever have possessed Logan to ask that question now, of all times? Oh, man... talk about embarrassing! Hahahaha!
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. This 'TALK' has been set up for almost a week. McKenzie made Logan tell her his criteria for a perfect wife with the agreement she'd tell him on the next night they pulled surveillance together. This is the night. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
