Welcome, Red Riding-Hood!
Find me, find me, if you can...60 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, a well written, rather amusing poem and a good entry to the contest. The art featured is a choice you made - not an easy one I should think but you came up with a good idea. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hello Yvette, a well written, rather amusing poem and a good entry to the contest. The art featured is a choice you made - not an easy one I should think but you came up with a good idea. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Dorothy.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Ben1
That was a good poem about little red riding hood. It was a funny poem that i was not expecting, especially brothers grim story. Maybe since the hood was in her way that is why she wondered off the trail. Anyways good job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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That was a good poem about little red riding hood. It was a funny poem that i was not expecting, especially brothers grim story. Maybe since the hood was in her way that is why she wondered off the trail. Anyways good job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Ben.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
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Thank you for your poem, I was actually the one who created the contest and your poem was exactly what I wanted.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awesome!! Too say the least! Poor Red Riding Hood and her blinding hood! Such a cute poem! But...maybe she should keep it on and not discover what is near! LoL!
Thank you for sharing this! xoxo
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Awesome!! Too say the least! Poor Red Riding Hood and her blinding hood! Such a cute poem! But...maybe she should keep it on and not discover what is near! LoL!
Thank you for sharing this! xoxo
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Diana.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, my friend -- stay warm up there! :) Yvette
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Oh thank God! I thought it might be the end of her! LoL! You are doing superbly in the contest and of course, it?s my favorite!! xoxo
Comment from Dancemom
This is a cute little poem with lots of whimsy and fun. Well written and fun following the directions and searching in the picture. I am a little disappointed that there is nothing there. I was tricked. Lol. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is a cute little poem with lots of whimsy and fun. Well written and fun following the directions and searching in the picture. I am a little disappointed that there is nothing there. I was tricked. Lol. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Heather.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvette,
This is a smoothly metered abcb group of quatrains about someone or something haunting the woods and wanting Little Red Riding Hood to find
it. It doesn't sound like a wolf, because wolves don't hide up in trees or it could be a wolf hiding behind a tree.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yvette,
This is a smoothly metered abcb group of quatrains about someone or something haunting the woods and wanting Little Red Riding Hood to find
it. It doesn't sound like a wolf, because wolves don't hide up in trees or it could be a wolf hiding behind a tree.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Joan.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Joan
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Joan
Comment from Susan X Smith
I enjoyed reading this light-hearted, whimsical piece. Although you don't specifically mention it, I am guessing that the speaker is the wolf. The picture also looks like it belongs in a fairy tale book.
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I enjoyed reading this light-hearted, whimsical piece. Although you don't specifically mention it, I am guessing that the speaker is the wolf. The picture also looks like it belongs in a fairy tale book.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Susan.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Yvette, what an extremely clever poem! I can't imagine coming up with all the ways you did to describe where "Red" should be looking to find whomever the speaker is... Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, Yvette, what an extremely clever poem! I can't imagine coming up with all the ways you did to describe where "Red" should be looking to find whomever the speaker is... Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, O Canada Lady - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
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LOL -methinks you spilled the beans...
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Y. M. Roger
I took all your clues to find Red, and had fun doing so, with your excellent rhyming words. I believe I found you and you take off your hood, or leave it on to continue with others to find where you are hidden.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hello Y. M. Roger
I took all your clues to find Red, and had fun doing so, with your excellent rhyming words. I believe I found you and you take off your hood, or leave it on to continue with others to find where you are hidden.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Gert.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your awesome review with those lovely stars shining above it ? makes the crazy blonde want to create more nonsense some day!! Have a great weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - what a cute read. I think this would work well as a children's poem. It's entertaining for us big kids too. Great imagination on display. I guess I should say for the record, I have no idea what thing is in the picture that you're writing about, and I'm not wearing a hood. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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LOL - what a cute read. I think this would work well as a children's poem. It's entertaining for us big kids too. Great imagination on display. I guess I should say for the record, I have no idea what thing is in the picture that you're writing about, and I'm not wearing a hood. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, Louise.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review - you are appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from crzypnter
Yes, six stars to you. This is a wonderfully written poem and I love the humorous tone. The picture enhances your thoughts in this poem well. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yes, six stars to you. This is a wonderfully written poem and I love the humorous tone. The picture enhances your thoughts in this poem well. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody, August.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) LOL!!! :) For the contest, we had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your awesome review and those lovely stars, my friend - much appreciated! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
