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Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "St. Louis Chapter 20 part 3"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! How does Logan approach that! Well, we not any closer to getting a result, each time they get something concrete to use, it's blown up or something. Poor Mac, this is telling on her nerves. We still need to know why Mac is targeted, and by whom. Is it Parks? We wait to see. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
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LOL! How does Logan approach that! Well, we not any closer to getting a result, each time they get something concrete to use, it's blown up or something. Poor Mac, this is telling on her nerves. We still need to know why Mac is targeted, and by whom. Is it Parks? We wait to see. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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We shall wait. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, what a sweet chapter, Barbara, amidst all the bad news. Yeah, I think that Mckenzie needs to put on a little more if they are continuing to have those late night encounters. The poor man. I love the story, and the budding romance. Ulla xx
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Awe, what a sweet chapter, Barbara, amidst all the bad news. Yeah, I think that Mckenzie needs to put on a little more if they are continuing to have those late night encounters. The poor man. I love the story, and the budding romance. Ulla xx
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. Logan has his hands full. LOL
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Yes, more so than most. hehe!!
Comment from Ben Colder
He will think of something. Looks this continues to be bitter-sweet in the long run. Yes, I think Park is involved but waiting for a sleeper. Good one Barb.
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He will think of something. Looks this continues to be bitter-sweet in the long run. Yes, I think Park is involved but waiting for a sleeper. Good one Barb.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. We will continue to discover more information about Parks and others.
Comment from royowen
So, it looks like they think Sydney Parks is is the culprit and quite possibly Meghan's murderer. But they're not sure yet, so they need to gather overwhelming evidence that he is the definite instigator. Beautifully written again Barbara. Poor Logan is struggling to keep his hands to himself, as far as Mackenzie's concerned, well done, blessings, Roy
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So, it looks like they think Sydney Parks is is the culprit and quite possibly Meghan's murderer. But they're not sure yet, so they need to gather overwhelming evidence that he is the definite instigator. Beautifully written again Barbara. Poor Logan is struggling to keep his hands to himself, as far as Mackenzie's concerned, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. Logan is a gentleman but McKenzie is not making it easy.
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That?s right.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
So it sounds as if McKenzie is still feeling pretty violated over having a total of six bugs found in her place, which is perfectly natural. And the suspicion is blowing toward Parks. There's always a motive lurking behind the curtains, it seems.
With this part:
She glanced at Logan. "I won't, besides he won't let me."
I would try: "I won't. Besides, he won't let me."
Can't wait to read more of what might be coming up.
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So it sounds as if McKenzie is still feeling pretty violated over having a total of six bugs found in her place, which is perfectly natural. And the suspicion is blowing toward Parks. There's always a motive lurking behind the curtains, it seems.
With this part:
She glanced at Logan. "I won't, besides he won't let me."
I would try: "I won't. Besides, he won't let me."
Can't wait to read more of what might be coming up.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I will change that area.
