Cloud-Watching
Pretty sure Grandma was right all along...50 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I saved a six for this beautiful poem, dear Yvette. I had not the time to enter this contest with my novel publishimg but you ran away with the prize here. This is just as good as laying outside watching the clouds go by. A real treat.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I saved a six for this beautiful poem, dear Yvette. I had not the time to enter this contest with my novel publishimg but you ran away with the prize here. This is just as good as laying outside watching the clouds go by. A real treat.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Oh, Lady Sal, thank THANK YOU for those lovely stars, my lady, and thanks so much for joining the show! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the nephophile contest. You have described the clouds so vividly that I want to see them. The flow and rhyming pattern of your poem is very lovely. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a great entry for the nephophile contest. You have described the clouds so vividly that I want to see them. The flow and rhyming pattern of your poem is very lovely. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the show, Heather! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really beautiful and very creative Y.M. I love it! Your colorful and descriptive wording is excellent and a joy to read. You've answered this challenge well and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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This is really beautiful and very creative Y.M. I love it! Your colorful and descriptive wording is excellent and a joy to read. You've answered this challenge well and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Jeffrey! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
Comment from royowen
This is a great addition to the nephophile registry Yvette, a little different from the poetic flight of fancy. A more scientific approach to the subject, but nevertheless, an excellent one. Smooth and articulate, well rhymed in abcb rhyme, and a good contribution to the genre, well done, blessings, Roy
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This is a great addition to the nephophile registry Yvette, a little different from the poetic flight of fancy. A more scientific approach to the subject, but nevertheless, an excellent one. Smooth and articulate, well rhymed in abcb rhyme, and a good contribution to the genre, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Roy! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
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Excellent
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was truly amazing and very well done. The picture itself represented the beauty of the clouds. But I do so like the concept of the poem that the angel artists were responsible for the shapes within the clouds. I do agree that one should cloud watch when they safely have the time to do so.
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Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was truly amazing and very well done. The picture itself represented the beauty of the clouds. But I do so like the concept of the poem that the angel artists were responsible for the shapes within the clouds. I do agree that one should cloud watch when they safely have the time to do so.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Ali! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
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Yikes, if a teacher workshop is anything like a nursing workshop, I will definitely think about you and even offer a few prayers. Clouds are indeed wonderful and you presented this so well. You are so very welcome Yvette.
Comment from Therese Caron
The picture of the clouds behind the house or barn is absolutely stunning, setting the pace for your poem. You have described each type of cloud perfectly, with beautiful descriptions for each one. Your words flow wonderfully. The rhyme scheme is perfect. Absolutely gorgeous poem.
A definite six! Good luck in the contest.
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The picture of the clouds behind the house or barn is absolutely stunning, setting the pace for your poem. You have described each type of cloud perfectly, with beautiful descriptions for each one. Your words flow wonderfully. The rhyme scheme is perfect. Absolutely gorgeous poem.
A definite six! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Oh, Terry, thank THANK YOU for those lovely stars, my lady, and thanks so much for joining the show! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
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I have 3 sisters who are teachers. I hear!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed--alive with vivid imagery.
Personification is effectively used to convey "character sketches" of the types of clouds.
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Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed--alive with vivid imagery.
Personification is effectively used to convey "character sketches" of the types of clouds.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed--alive with vivid imagery.
Personification is effectively used to convey "character sketches" of the types of clouds.
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Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed--alive with vivid imagery.
Personification is effectively used to convey "character sketches" of the types of clouds.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Janice! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette, great job with the well worded poem about clouds. Good luck in the contest, I am giving you a virtual six! You have brought the clouds to life.
Bill
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Yvette, great job with the well worded poem about clouds. Good luck in the contest, I am giving you a virtual six! You have brought the clouds to life.
Bill
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Bill! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
Comment from lauralumummu
Amazing and well written and so peaceful. This takes me back to my grandmother's cottage and laying in the field dreaming while looking at those clouds, without a care in the world. I wish I had a six to give you. Did you hear around those swarms of drones in the colorado sky they sound ominous? Your friend Laura xo
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Amazing and well written and so peaceful. This takes me back to my grandmother's cottage and laying in the field dreaming while looking at those clouds, without a care in the world. I wish I had a six to give you. Did you hear around those swarms of drones in the colorado sky they sound ominous? Your friend Laura xo
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show, Laura! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
