Finches
Our year-round feeder friends33 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. You did a fine job with the poetic style called for. I liked the poem very much. You managed to get the message across clearly and did it with a rhyme scheme. Excellent. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
Hello Mystery Writer. You did a fine job with the poetic style called for. I liked the poem very much. You managed to get the message across clearly and did it with a rhyme scheme. Excellent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed the finches, Z -- such fun little fellas! Thanks for your review!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Therese Caron
Great poem about those darlings little finches. My kids had birds, including finches, and they were so beautiful. You did a wonderful job following the rules of the Pleiades. Lovely words, lovely picture. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
Great poem about those darlings little finches. My kids had birds, including finches, and they were so beautiful. You did a wonderful job following the rules of the Pleiades. Lovely words, lovely picture. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - they are such lively little fellas! Thanks for your review!!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Finches", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet has with craft and well-honed skill, told it as it is. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
"Finches", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet has with craft and well-honed skill, told it as it is. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Duchess -- so glad you enjoyed these fun little fellas!!
Dear Anon,
I certainly enjoyed your fun little fellas,
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Janet Foor
A delightful Pleiades poem for the writing prompt. We are bird watches and enjoy the finches in our feeders. They do bring joy with their antics.
Well done
Blessings and Happy New Year.
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
A delightful Pleiades poem for the writing prompt. We are bird watches and enjoy the finches in our feeders. They do bring joy with their antics.
Well done
Blessings and Happy New Year.
Janet
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Janet
-- so glad you, too, enjoy these lively little fellas!!
Comment from RShipp
You seem to have followed all the guidelines for a Pleiades poem. Plus, you allowed yourself a rhyme as well. Enjoyed.
Many of your words choices were very visual. I could see the finches enjoying a good swing after eating their fill.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
You seem to have followed all the guidelines for a Pleiades poem. Plus, you allowed yourself a rhyme as well. Enjoyed.
Many of your words choices were very visual. I could see the finches enjoying a good swing after eating their fill.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed the finches! They really are fun lil fellas! Thanks for your review!
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully written and formatted, dear mystery poet. I love the pinkish red hues seen on the finches. This is my favorite color.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
Beautifully written and formatted, dear mystery poet. I love the pinkish red hues seen on the finches. This is my favorite color.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hooray!! So very glad you enjoyed the finches - they are just plain fun lil' guys and gals!! Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Susan Larson
I love the alliteration in your poem as your words flit and flutter through the reader's mind and imagination. You show a great command of the language. Also, I love your picture of the finches.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
I love the alliteration in your poem as your words flit and flutter through the reader's mind and imagination. You show a great command of the language. Also, I love your picture of the finches.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed the finches - they're such fun! Thanks for stopping by and Happy 2020!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You followed all
of the directions for the form.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word picture
of the finches and their cheery nature.
-"Flit and flutter in bird ballet"
is a very good example.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You followed all
of the directions for the form.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word picture
of the finches and their cheery nature.
-"Flit and flutter in bird ballet"
is a very good example.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - such fun, aren't they?! Thanks for stopping by!
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You are quite welcome. Finches are fun:)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a good choice of subject for your entry and written true to form. Well worded with a lovely picture and an overall good display. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Happy New Year to you and yours. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
Hello anon, a good choice of subject for your entry and written true to form. Well worded with a lovely picture and an overall good display. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Happy New Year to you and yours. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Happy 2020 to you as well! So glad you enjoyed the lil finches - they're always such fun! Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I think you did a very nice job describing these feathered creatures. And, just watching them, what joy they can bring.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I think you did a very nice job describing these feathered creatures. And, just watching them, what joy they can bring.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thanks for stopping by!