LOVE OF NATURE
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Comment from Wils
I love the reference you make about flight ballet; something I had never thought about but you are spot on right. A very nice free verse poem, birds truly are breathtaking. Nice job
Geoff
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I love the reference you make about flight ballet; something I had never thought about but you are spot on right. A very nice free verse poem, birds truly are breathtaking. Nice job
Geoff
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Geoff, Thank you very much for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LeannaP
This us exquisite work.
I love the "carrot" color you used for the background.
You write with passion and it shows.
Thank you for sharing this.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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This us exquisite work.
I love the "carrot" color you used for the background.
You write with passion and it shows.
Thank you for sharing this.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the complimentary review, Leanna
Hugs Trisha
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You're welcome and happy new year!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely free verse, Trisha, that blends together the natural, the spiritual and our perception of them both!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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What a lovely free verse, Trisha, that blends together the natural, the spiritual and our perception of them both!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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You?re so positive, Thank you very much for your suppotrtive review review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this free verse about the patterns of birds in the sky. You brought it to life with personification and alliteration. It also looks like a woman's hat. Merry Christmas! Bill
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Great job with this free verse about the patterns of birds in the sky. You brought it to life with personification and alliteration. It also looks like a woman's hat. Merry Christmas! Bill
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Hi Bill! Nice to SEE you st last! I always appreciate your reviews. , I These bird formations were new to me
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
The canvas of God contains a palet that no artist can compare. () The patters of a flock of blackbirds create can never be geometrically proscribed. 00 Very good and inspiring work.
Rikki LXXIII
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The canvas of God contains a palet that no artist can compare. () The patters of a flock of blackbirds create can never be geometrically proscribed. 00 Very good and inspiring work.
Rikki LXXIII
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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It?s amazing to think birds can make those flight patterns . I?ve never seen that before. Technology has been a wonderful thing, it?s brought nature to me in a very enjoyable way. Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
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It amazes me there are not dozens of collisions like bumper cars in the air.
Rikki XOXO
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LOL they have better guidance systems than us!
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They best have I bump into things walking around the house.
Rikki LXXIII
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You?re funny
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You?re funny
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I tries!
Rikki XOXO