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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Mackenzie and Logan seem to be prepping for possible marriage, with that boxing workout (just kidding, or not). Now I am curious to find out what else Mark will be doing. I like the line: "Now, I'm going to whip your butt." Only because it is said in a teasing way. Nice share.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Mackenzie and Logan seem to be prepping for possible marriage, with that boxing workout (just kidding, or not). Now I am curious to find out what else Mark will be doing. I like the line: "Now, I'm going to whip your butt." Only because it is said in a teasing way. Nice share.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry I have been away but felt like checking in and reading some post. These two are making wedding bells ring off in the distance. Its good work as usual. I find no mistakes. Thanks for sharing another one of your great stories.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Sorry I have been away but felt like checking in and reading some post. These two are making wedding bells ring off in the distance. Its good work as usual. I find no mistakes. Thanks for sharing another one of your great stories.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read. When you don't check in, I worry about you.
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Had a very hard night went to Emergy care. Doing some better not out woods just yet, but I getting there. Appreciate you.
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I'm praying.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, yes, I liked this chapter and I liked it a lot. So Logan, is now jealous of Mark. That's interesting. But romance is certainly on the cards here. Just a minor thing: Don't overuse he/she widened his/her eyes. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Hi Barbara, yes, I liked this chapter and I liked it a lot. So Logan, is now jealous of Mark. That's interesting. But romance is certainly on the cards here. Just a minor thing: Don't overuse he/she widened his/her eyes. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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I will keep an eye on that. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I really enjoyed reading it. Your characters seem to come alive in real life like situations. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I really enjoyed reading it. Your characters seem to come alive in real life like situations. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
Ah, so Logan can be bruised, an old "maybe" guy comes along and Logan is a little "miffed", so Mackenzie won't let him go until he tells her he likes her, "grown" on him he says, she says the same, then they go back to their boxing dual. This is a defining episode Barbara, I like your romance stories, they are precious, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Ah, so Logan can be bruised, an old "maybe" guy comes along and Logan is a little "miffed", so Mackenzie won't let him go until he tells her he likes her, "grown" on him he says, she says the same, then they go back to their boxing dual. This is a defining episode Barbara, I like your romance stories, they are precious, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Well done
Comment from Sankey
I got a bit worried when Ulla was my only favourite around. You did good in this. Romance in the wings I think. Now just 2 spags, today. She back(ed) away and held up her hand. "Wait a minute."
"We have never dated or shacked up," she teased.["]
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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I got a bit worried when Ulla was my only favourite around. You did good in this. Romance in the wings I think. Now just 2 spags, today. She back(ed) away and held up her hand. "Wait a minute."
"We have never dated or shacked up," she teased.["]
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the two catches. I have made the corrections and even remembered to save. LOL I appreciate the help.
