Chew On That!
Holiday reflections from a gumball machine...12 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaa, author this is brilliantly hilarious and original. What a great commentary on what can happen with family gatherings once the niceties have lost their flavour. An inspired artwork choice too.
Excellent work here and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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Haaaaaa, author this is brilliantly hilarious and original. What a great commentary on what can happen with family gatherings once the niceties have lost their flavour. An inspired artwork choice too.
Excellent work here and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Gloria -- glad I could put a grin on your beautiful face this evening! :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this well-written,
amusing poem. The in-laws might not appreciate the humor, but I do.
Good simile
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this well-written,
amusing poem. The in-laws might not appreciate the humor, but I do.
Good simile
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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LOL!! So glad you did - was afraid I might step on a few toes... wink, wink!! Thank you and Happy Thanksgiving! ;-)