Picture Day
Explaining why mom wasn't told.15 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this memoir is a good entry for the contest.
The story about your school picture day is easy to read and follow in the dialogue.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I think this memoir is a good entry for the contest.
The story about your school picture day is easy to read and follow in the dialogue.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much Sharon for your comments and wonderful rating. I am glad you read my story.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Good memory. The story so mirrors those last-minute mornings when you remembered to tell your mother, what you forgot to tell her at the right time. Just another day in the life of an elementary school student.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Good memory. The story so mirrors those last-minute mornings when you remembered to tell your mother, what you forgot to tell her at the right time. Just another day in the life of an elementary school student.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Raffaelina thank you so much for reading and commenting on my story. My sisters and daughters almost to the person, that was the first thing out of their mouth when they came home from school. The second, what will I wear. Your stars are awesome.
Comment from Miranda Langston
hehe :D this is such a cute story and it's a funny memory, too. good luck in the contest ^.^ i hope you win. it really is a great story and i like that you only use dialogue. that's very creative
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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hehe :D this is such a cute story and it's a funny memory, too. good luck in the contest ^.^ i hope you win. it really is a great story and i like that you only use dialogue. that's very creative
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much Miranda for reading my story. Your comments are wonderful and your stars awesome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This memoir, Picture Day, is a classic school event drama that still happens today. Notes from the school entrusted to kids; why?
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This memoir, Picture Day, is a classic school event drama that still happens today. Notes from the school entrusted to kids; why?
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for reading my story Bill. My daughters' and wife's reactions mirrored that of my mother and sisters. I presume the same happened with my grandchildren and is happening with my great grandchildren. It will never end. Your stars are awesome.
Comment from JudyE
School picture day was quite the big deal, wasn't it? My brother was born in 1938 and Mum was upset that his school photo shows a handkerchief pinned to his shirt! Thanks for sharing your memories with us.
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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School picture day was quite the big deal, wasn't it? My brother was born in 1938 and Mum was upset that his school photo shows a handkerchief pinned to his shirt! Thanks for sharing your memories with us.
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for reading my little story. Your comments brought a smile to my face and your stars are awesome.