My Life
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaah, the gracious and forgiving Alie -- I would expect nothing less in reading you over the past year, my friend!! ;) :) Oh, and they NEVER WILL fix the roads in Louisian...was born/raised there and we call them Lousy-ana Roads!! ;) :) And what a long week, my lady -- surprised you were up to typing about it! ;) :) Looking forward to the next update - thanx, as always, for sharing your adventures! ;) Yvette
a stanch Catholic --> a staunch Catholic
Again it gravel --> Again, it was gravel
gnome graffiti: put us �½ mile AND was a 2 �½ hour
that much lol. --> that much - lol.
fairgrounds, the site --> fairgrounds, and the site
campgrounds which was --> campgrounds which were OR campground which was
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Aaaaah, the gracious and forgiving Alie -- I would expect nothing less in reading you over the past year, my friend!! ;) :) Oh, and they NEVER WILL fix the roads in Louisian...was born/raised there and we call them Lousy-ana Roads!! ;) :) And what a long week, my lady -- surprised you were up to typing about it! ;) :) Looking forward to the next update - thanx, as always, for sharing your adventures! ;) Yvette
a stanch Catholic --> a staunch Catholic
Again it gravel --> Again, it was gravel
gnome graffiti: put us �½ mile AND was a 2 �½ hour
that much lol. --> that much - lol.
fairgrounds, the site --> fairgrounds, and the site
campgrounds which was --> campgrounds which were OR campground which was
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you Yvette for your kind and hilarious comments, I will make those changes in a few moments.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Congratulations on Jim's new job. A hard trip, but you made it. You did a great job with the teenage boy, convincing him to stop vaping. What a stupid idea that was. Anything to make money, I guess.
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Congratulations on Jim's new job. A hard trip, but you made it. You did a great job with the teenage boy, convincing him to stop vaping. What a stupid idea that was. Anything to make money, I guess.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you Phyllis for reviewing and your great comments. I agree, chemicals are still chemicals and it was a stupid idea.