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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "St. Louis Chapter 17 part 2"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from w.j.debi
Great descriptions and excellent dialogue make characters engaging and draw the reader into the story. Sounds like we have quite the murder mystery here and it's getting more complicated.
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Great descriptions and excellent dialogue make characters engaging and draw the reader into the story. Sounds like we have quite the murder mystery here and it's getting more complicated.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JanetRussek
This chapter captured my interest from the beginning. It flowed smoothly from line to line. Dialog seemed natural and fit the characters well. The chapter left me wanting to read more. Wonderful writing. I look forward to your next chapter.
Regards,
Janet
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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This chapter captured my interest from the beginning. It flowed smoothly from line to line. Dialog seemed natural and fit the characters well. The chapter left me wanting to read more. Wonderful writing. I look forward to your next chapter.
Regards,
Janet
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from judiverse
The plot thickens, as Jose says. Donny's apartment looked suspiciously like there'd been foul play. Then they discover his body's been discovered in a drainage ditch. There goes a suspect or at least a person who might know something about Meghan's murder. Excellent balance of light-heartedness along with the suspense. There's been a delay in the autopsy results, which sounds like someone's trying to obstruct the investigation. judi
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The plot thickens, as Jose says. Donny's apartment looked suspiciously like there'd been foul play. Then they discover his body's been discovered in a drainage ditch. There goes a suspect or at least a person who might know something about Meghan's murder. Excellent balance of light-heartedness along with the suspense. There's been a delay in the autopsy results, which sounds like someone's trying to obstruct the investigation. judi
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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I think somebody is trying to hide the evidence, but why??? Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. If it turns out Meghan was pregnant, the killer might have a lot to lose if news that he's the father came out. judi
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So now they'll be living together. I wonder how long they'll be able to hold off the passion boiling below. LOL! Interesting that Logan needs protection from Mac for a change... nice twist :)
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So now they'll be living together. I wonder how long they'll be able to hold off the passion boiling below. LOL! Interesting that Logan needs protection from Mac for a change... nice twist :)
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
