St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "St. Louis Chapter 17 part 1"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from royowen
You've woven a great plot Barbara, it's very complicated with only a couple of suspects and most unlikely ones, but they do seem a integral part of the set up, don't They? It's only been 9 days into the association between Mac and Logan, but an awful lot has happened since. Well done Barbara. Good plotting, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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You've woven a great plot Barbara, it's very complicated with only a couple of suspects and most unlikely ones, but they do seem a integral part of the set up, don't They? It's only been 9 days into the association between Mac and Logan, but an awful lot has happened since. Well done Barbara. Good plotting, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. I felt because it takes me so long to post these novels, I need a running total of days. Some reviewers think it's been month or years.
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Yes, it does seem longer, but a lot has happened.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story. Yes, I have the same questions as they do. Is it a concerned neighbour or has he something to hide? Time will show. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story. Yes, I have the same questions as they do. Is it a concerned neighbour or has he something to hide? Time will show. Ulla xx
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Time will tell. Actually, I had let it drop until I reread it this morning and decided he needed a bigger role, so I will rewrite the ending. LOL I hate when characters tell me what to do. Thank you for the support.
Comment from Sankey
Good work. Glad to have you back again. Getting ever so close to my moving off the paid account. Walu reckons I could have left the accounts open and once the money runs out they go to basic so I dunno. Just one spag this round. "You okay? I can do this if you want me to[o]."
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Good work. Glad to have you back again. Getting ever so close to my moving off the paid account. Walu reckons I could have left the accounts open and once the money runs out they go to basic so I dunno. Just one spag this round. "You okay? I can do this if you want me to[o]."
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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I will fix that. Thank you for the kind review.
