Aaron's Dragons
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The First Battle"An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs
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Comment from brenda bickers
Oh my Cindy.
You pinched one of my sixes for this one. I really am loving this story as it infolds. Dylan is about to find out what Aaron has been up to and the dragons are now playing a more active part in Aarons Quest.
Can we have the next chapter now Please??? lol
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Oh my Cindy.
You pinched one of my sixes for this one. I really am loving this story as it infolds. Dylan is about to find out what Aaron has been up to and the dragons are now playing a more active part in Aarons Quest.
Can we have the next chapter now Please??? lol
Brenda.x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the six! Dylan is in for a few surprises.
Comment from Sallyo
Looks to me as if Dylan is coming in on the secret. Let's hope he can be trusted to keep his mouth shut! Aaron's dragons are coming into their own as a force to be reckoned with.
"Hear anything," he asked softly.
"Hear anything?" he asked softly.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Looks to me as if Dylan is coming in on the secret. Let's hope he can be trusted to keep his mouth shut! Aaron's dragons are coming into their own as a force to be reckoned with.
"Hear anything," he asked softly.
"Hear anything?" he asked softly.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks. Glad you're enjoying the story. I'll fix that question mark right away.
Comment from tfawcus
When I read this, I found myself absorbed in the story. No intrusion by the author to distract. A sign of good writing in my opinion. Good dialogue, fast moving action, a believable scenario as a backdrop to the magic taking place.
Hidden lake - if that's a place name - Hidden Lake.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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When I read this, I found myself absorbed in the story. No intrusion by the author to distract. A sign of good writing in my opinion. Good dialogue, fast moving action, a believable scenario as a backdrop to the magic taking place.
Hidden lake - if that's a place name - Hidden Lake.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the six. I'll fix that typo right now.
Comment from Mary Ann McPhedran
An excellent story and you you have penned it well with a good display, and easy to follow
story line. I enjoyed reading and hope there is more to follow. Mary Ann.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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An excellent story and you you have penned it well with a good display, and easy to follow
story line. I enjoyed reading and hope there is more to follow. Mary Ann.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it. There's lots more to come.