Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Danpald,
You've written an excellent short poem with political overtones
the resonate for many on and off fanstory.
If the native Americans had built a wall around their incredible land,
none of the "new" Americans would be here.
Well done with excellent graphics.
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this uniquely presented verse. Your choice of opposing photographs is a perfect comparison between the two thoughts you present to your reader. Very well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really like this it is so clever and original.very profound words. Your illustrations and presentation are excellent. Very well done.
Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from Willosa

Excellent

A nice write, great imagery with the words, even if you had not had the illustrations it what clear. Clever to convey so much with few words, I guess the reader can either take this piece literally or use it as an analogy for the chaos we currently live in politically in so many parts of the world.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh, I like it. It is so clever and could mean so much in today's political climate whether you're in the US or in the UK. There's drama going on in both countries. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Clever writing about the subject of heaven and hell. That is true that you can live however you want and cross the open border into hell. God gives us grace to follow Christ into heaven.
Bill

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, I chuckled reading this distinctly clever write, especially the addition of the rhyme - well constructed and strikingly presented in its entirety and smooth movement...

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019

Thanks for the comments.

reply by evesayshi on 20-Oct-2019

You're very welcome, Dan...Eve

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hello Author, Dan. You have used clever words in this poem. I like the comparing as it was done. The artwork with it helps to define your meaning lso, but they are not necessary from my point of view at least. Blessings. Bob

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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reply by Mastery on 22-Oct-2019

:) Bob

reply by Mastery on 22-Oct-2019

:) Bob

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Well, does that mean the Democrats will be happy with this access?
Great Pictures and a really good line. Imagery prevails when the right words are used. Well done!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019

Thanks for the comments. I do not call them Democrats any more. They are for Infantize so they are now "Demonrats".

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

THIS is a very interesting and creative piece of work. Great photos chosen to go with your words and the message speaks loud and clear within the short message. Unique, creative, very well done! Great job!
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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