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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I think Bill has a thing for KIMBERLY. She is really adorable. Granddaughter?
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
the greatest ever
baby girl alive
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I think Bill has a thing for KIMBERLY. She is really adorable. Granddaughter?
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
KIM BER LY
is the greatest ever baby girl
the greatest ever
baby girl alive
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My daughter's youngest.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you are in love here Bill and I am loving the name because I called named my daughter Kimberley too! A sweet and endearing song that she fell to sleep listening too, love Dolly x
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I think you are in love here Bill and I am loving the name because I called named my daughter Kimberley too! A sweet and endearing song that she fell to sleep listening too, love Dolly x
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very sweet little song about the beautiful little girl that you love so much. That is a very nice picture your smart phone took. They just steal our hearts don't they? Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Bill, This is a very sweet little song about the beautiful little girl that you love so much. That is a very nice picture your smart phone took. They just steal our hearts don't they? Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Thanks, Teri
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You are so welcome. She is a beautiful little baby!
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Makes me want to put it to music. BUT one can chant it, so music not needed. Delightful photo to accompany your lyrics. Like the way you write the lyrics as guidance on how to chant it.
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Makes me want to put it to music. BUT one can chant it, so music not needed. Delightful photo to accompany your lyrics. Like the way you write the lyrics as guidance on how to chant it.
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from NickieT
This poem is sweet and I can see the sense of melody behind it, however I wish that there was just a touch of variation to round it out. It is clear how much you love this little girl and that makes me happy for having read this poem.
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This poem is sweet and I can see the sense of melody behind it, however I wish that there was just a touch of variation to round it out. It is clear how much you love this little girl and that makes me happy for having read this poem.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
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Just a ditty I was singing to my granddaughter today.