Night's end
Horror in three sentences contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
I think that all the contest requirements have been met in your response to this challenge. You have created a macabre and chilling scenario of a mentally deranged person on the loose with a machete.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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I think that all the contest requirements have been met in your response to this challenge. You have created a macabre and chilling scenario of a mentally deranged person on the loose with a machete.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Tony, for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Comment from Willosa
You certainly conveyed horror with your three sentences, so good luck with the contest. I like how it builds to the conclusion and so thoroughly highlights the feeling experienced by the killer.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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You certainly conveyed horror with your three sentences, so good luck with the contest. I like how it builds to the conclusion and so thoroughly highlights the feeling experienced by the killer.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Willosa, for this most excellent review.
God bless
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This sounds like a very challenging prompt. You have certainly met the requirements. You have indeed delivered very descriptive chiller in just three sentences.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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This sounds like a very challenging prompt. You have certainly met the requirements. You have indeed delivered very descriptive chiller in just three sentences.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thank you for this encouraging review my, friend. I enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
My, my, my. Nice job. Only three lines and you managed to find him, get him close enough and hack him to pieces. That is not easy to do. You must have been practicing...?? hehehe
Well done. Good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
My, my, my. Nice job. Only three lines and you managed to find him, get him close enough and hack him to pieces. That is not easy to do. You must have been practicing...?? hehehe
Well done. Good luck!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Hehe! Maybe so. Thank you, Robyn. Always a pleasure reading your reviews.
God bless
Comment from shaffer40
I see I'm too late to vote. My computer was in the shop for several days. I think this is well-written and delightfully spooky. Perhaps you can let me know how you fared in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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I see I'm too late to vote. My computer was in the shop for several days. I think this is well-written and delightfully spooky. Perhaps you can let me know how you fared in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the awesome six star review. I?m leading at the moment. Happy your computer has been fixed, must have been awful without it😔.
God bless
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Oh, happy about the lead.
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I did win, exciting.
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Oh, goodie. Thanks for letting me know.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
you did a good job with this short piece. All the rules adhered to so no worries there. there's a nice atmosphere created and a sound, deep point of view.
best of luck
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Hi there,
you did a good job with this short piece. All the rules adhered to so no worries there. there's a nice atmosphere created and a sound, deep point of view.
best of luck
GMG
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thank you, GMG, for the awesome review. I loved the restrictions this one presented.
God bless
Comment from papa55mike
This story is very well-written and the picture fits perfectly. What a great contest!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This story is very well-written and the picture fits perfectly. What a great contest!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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I enjoyed the restrictions of the contest and of course, this is my favorite genre. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from dmt1967
This short story is terrifying and the picture helped. For such a short story about a theme that needs more description you did very well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This short story is terrifying and the picture helped. For such a short story about a theme that needs more description you did very well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thank you, dmt. I enjoyed the prompt.
God bless
Comment from LisaMay
You express the intensity of your bloodthirsty desires very eloquently. Just a suggestion: a corpse is a dead person - I bet you got more satisfaction from the sound of his screams as you dismembered his living body first, you murderous bastard!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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You express the intensity of your bloodthirsty desires very eloquently. Just a suggestion: a corpse is a dead person - I bet you got more satisfaction from the sound of his screams as you dismembered his living body first, you murderous bastard!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Lol! Thank you, Lisa, for this awesome review. I did enjoy the restrictions this prompt offered. Thank you for the suggestion as well, the killer would definitely have enjoyed the live version.
God bless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is first rate horror and this violent attack is rare, but it does happen. You fulfilled the brief here, this is why I don't wonder about at night! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This is first rate horror and this violent attack is rare, but it does happen. You fulfilled the brief here, this is why I don't wonder about at night! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. I always appreciate your time.
God bless