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Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?

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Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This was a great chapter. let me guess...no need to tell I will see later, I am sure. Mackensie's Grandfather abused his Granddaughter and she somehow accidentally killed him in self-defense? Or someone else found them and killed him (accidentally I think.) Now spags.Logan searched for McKenzie('s) parents,

Not sure about the following suggest...about [t]his death.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    You're close. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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I have no idea what could irk Mackenzie, but it's probably over the top. She would be too difficult for me I'm afraid. But Logan is sticking by her, he doesn't care, he still cares for her. I very interesting episode, some things are not right with Mack's family, I wonder what's going on. An excellent episode Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    We will find out there's some really deep stuff lurking, but will take time. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by royowen on 13-Oct-2019
    Good job