My FanStory Adventure
What this site means to me...13 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting read, and for the most part the rhyme scheme works within the poem. You met the contest requirements and chose an excellent picture to complement it. You might consider breaking the poem up into stanzas.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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This is an interesting read, and for the most part the rhyme scheme works within the poem. You met the contest requirements and chose an excellent picture to complement it. You might consider breaking the poem up into stanzas.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Your feedback is greatly appreciated. It has truly been a life saver for me to be inspired to write again! I decided not to break apart because I could not make even lines stanzas. So I thought it better to keep it one long continuous poem! xoxo
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely rhymed and mixed metre poem, author. The photograph works really well in starting our imaginations running with characters and authors. Great that you have found FanStory and can share your excellent poetry with all.
Best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Very nicely rhymed and mixed metre poem, author. The photograph works really well in starting our imaginations running with characters and authors. Great that you have found FanStory and can share your excellent poetry with all.
Best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Your feedback is greatly appreciated. It has truly been a life saver for me to be inspired to write again! I chose the picture because my friends here are young and old. xoxo
Comment from Mistydawn
What a very sweet poem. A wonderful shoutout to all your friends on this site. I love how you started with your humble beginnings and led up to today. I agree people here are fantastic. Very helpful and encouraging. A fun bunch to be around. I've learned and are still learning so much from all of them. Keep up the great work.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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What a very sweet poem. A wonderful shoutout to all your friends on this site. I love how you started with your humble beginnings and led up to today. I agree people here are fantastic. Very helpful and encouraging. A fun bunch to be around. I've learned and are still learning so much from all of them. Keep up the great work.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Your feedback is greatly appreciated. It has truly been a life saver for me to be inspired to write again! xoxo