The Harvest Sunrise
The astounding beauty that surrounds us.23 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is so comforting to read a poem that is full of appreciation for the blessings that we have surrounding us. Most of us are aware of the beauty on a daily basis, but then there are some who are not. So the poem provokes us to look and love. Nicely done and the picture tells all.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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It is so comforting to read a poem that is full of appreciation for the blessings that we have surrounding us. Most of us are aware of the beauty on a daily basis, but then there are some who are not. So the poem provokes us to look and love. Nicely done and the picture tells all.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Gail Denham
For sure we can enjoy the beautiful things of life. A good poem to bring this out. We took a long drive around a desert area two days ago - the beauty took our breath. So thankful.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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For sure we can enjoy the beautiful things of life. A good poem to bring this out. We took a long drive around a desert area two days ago - the beauty took our breath. So thankful.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Mike. This is a lovely image and poem to match. Is that your own photo? I agree that it's a great combination--walk, camera, coffee. I like the way you've written your entry with no caps and no punctuation. It fits nicely with the implied spontaneity of thought your poem offers. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Mike. This is a lovely image and poem to match. Is that your own photo? I agree that it's a great combination--walk, camera, coffee. I like the way you've written your entry with no caps and no punctuation. It fits nicely with the implied spontaneity of thought your poem offers. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Brett Matthew West
An early morning stroll can indeed bring many wonderful sights to behold especially when out on a farm. So many treasures can be found in "seeds" if one knows where to locate them. Simple pleasures are usually the best. Descriptive with a smooth lyrical flow.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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An early morning stroll can indeed bring many wonderful sights to behold especially when out on a farm. So many treasures can be found in "seeds" if one knows where to locate them. Simple pleasures are usually the best. Descriptive with a smooth lyrical flow.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hello, my friend! Many thanks for your words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I rarely see the sun rising because I am on the wrong side of the island! But it is a joy to see the start of a new day and all the promise it brings, your words are a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I rarely see the sun rising because I am on the wrong side of the island! But it is a joy to see the start of a new day and all the promise it brings, your words are a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
A graceful poem that touched me. What a glorious walk this poem depicts. Makes me want to pay more attention to my surroundings when I venture out. Good luck on the contest as you are a good contender.
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A graceful poem that touched me. What a glorious walk this poem depicts. Makes me want to pay more attention to my surroundings when I venture out. Good luck on the contest as you are a good contender.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Mike, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it very much, Your picture choice is super and so fitting. I could envision all the beautiful 'things' you wrote about in your poem. Your closing two lines sum up nicely Nature's gifts by way of God. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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You did a great job, Mike, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it very much, Your picture choice is super and so fitting. I could envision all the beautiful 'things' you wrote about in your poem. Your closing two lines sum up nicely Nature's gifts by way of God. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Cindy Warren
This time of year really is beautiful. There have been some beautiful sunrises and at night the moon seems especially bright. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This time of year really is beautiful. There have been some beautiful sunrises and at night the moon seems especially bright. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is a very beautiful free verse poem you have penned for the Take A Walk Poetry contest. You used very descriptive words and the picture was amazingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
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Mike, This is a very beautiful free verse poem you have penned for the Take A Walk Poetry contest. You used very descriptive words and the picture was amazingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Well, you can imagine the shock I got when I opened Fanstory this morning. I could away getaway to work any yesterday, and was stunned when there were 19 reviews to answer. This little poem has done very well for itself. Many thanks for all of the love and support!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from JudyE
There is so much beauty in the natural world if people would but take the time to notice it. I enjoyed your poem very much. The last two lines say it all really. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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There is so much beauty in the natural world if people would but take the time to notice it. I enjoyed your poem very much. The last two lines say it all really. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike