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Comment from Sankey
An interesting read, again. The plot seems to be getting thicker and thicker all the time, ha! Now for a few spags. "I didn't know who else to come to[o].
"Not really. It was [my] one of my neighbors.
It's a drop [sight](site)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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An interesting read, again. The plot seems to be getting thicker and thicker all the time, ha! Now for a few spags. "I didn't know who else to come to[o].
"Not really. It was [my] one of my neighbors.
It's a drop [sight](site)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
It's funny, a private detective doing what a police enquiry should have done, no wonder it's suspicious concerning Megan's death. It's a good thing they've got a police insider helping them in Bill. It's actually hard to believe it's only six days. Mackenzie's not as tough as she thinks she is. Well done Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : "No, (he'd) dead," he's?
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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It's funny, a private detective doing what a police enquiry should have done, no wonder it's suspicious concerning Megan's death. It's a good thing they've got a police insider helping them in Bill. It's actually hard to believe it's only six days. Mackenzie's not as tough as she thinks she is. Well done Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : "No, (he'd) dead," he's?
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the catch and the kind review. I made the correction.
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Well done
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Though not so important or contributory to the main theme, you have successfully handled and made it important and linked to the prime; taletelling and characters are realistic but dialogues are the life blood of this work; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Though not so important or contributory to the main theme, you have successfully handled and made it important and linked to the prime; taletelling and characters are realistic but dialogues are the life blood of this work; well said, well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb ( barbara.wilkey)
I smile at the way you draw a reader into reading about the investigation who murdered Megan. I hope to see a romance develop between McKenzie and Logan??
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Hello Barb ( barbara.wilkey)
I smile at the way you draw a reader into reading about the investigation who murdered Megan. I hope to see a romance develop between McKenzie and Logan??
Gert
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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The romance will eventually happen. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I really like this story where they trying to find his sister's killer. I really like the dialogue going on between the two of them and the hint of a budging romance. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Hi Barbara, I really like this story where they trying to find his sister's killer. I really like the dialogue going on between the two of them and the hint of a budging romance. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is another interesting chapter in your book about investigating his sisters murderer and his help from the private investigator. Seems like they have an interesting relationship going on and you leave the reader wanting to know more, especially about the man in the police department as a possible suspect.
Bill
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This is another interesting chapter in your book about investigating his sisters murderer and his help from the private investigator. Seems like they have an interesting relationship going on and you leave the reader wanting to know more, especially about the man in the police department as a possible suspect.
Bill
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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All in good time, all in good time. Thank you for the kind review.
