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Comment from royowen
The case is hotting up, they meet with Mitch who was Mackenzie's dad's partner, they discuss all the anomalies of the case on Mehgan's Murder. She says to herself she'll miss Logan when the case is finished. They've been right about a cover up in Mehgan's case, Mack discovers the name of Sidney Parks. Well done Barbara, and excellent episode, blessings, Roy
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The case is hotting up, they meet with Mitch who was Mackenzie's dad's partner, they discuss all the anomalies of the case on Mehgan's Murder. She says to herself she'll miss Logan when the case is finished. They've been right about a cover up in Mehgan's case, Mack discovers the name of Sidney Parks. Well done Barbara, and excellent episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome Barbara
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a great chapter. Great finish as well! Good reading as always. Suit yourself on my suggestions and there are one or two spags. The reason I called was I want to know [is] if you can be my partner at the Tin Roof tonight?
(Thinking to herself)"When he leaves, I'm going to miss him. I've gotten used to having him around, but he's still a pain." OR...(Looking at the dogs)"When he leaves, I'm going to miss him. I've gotten used to having him around, but he's still a pain."
Shaking (Nodding?)her head,
"Although, since we missed [the] your favorite shop
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Wow! What a great chapter. Great finish as well! Good reading as always. Suit yourself on my suggestions and there are one or two spags. The reason I called was I want to know [is] if you can be my partner at the Tin Roof tonight?
(Thinking to herself)"When he leaves, I'm going to miss him. I've gotten used to having him around, but he's still a pain." OR...(Looking at the dogs)"When he leaves, I'm going to miss him. I've gotten used to having him around, but he's still a pain."
Shaking (Nodding?)her head,
"Although, since we missed [the] your favorite shop
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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I have made corrections. Thank you for the catches.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So Megan was a drug user, not totally innocent. She could have angered her provider somehow. How can Mac be sure Mitch is clean just because he was her dad's partner. People change...and have secrets. But letting the cops know what she's found is probably smart, in case anything happens to her.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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So Megan was a drug user, not totally innocent. She could have angered her provider somehow. How can Mac be sure Mitch is clean just because he was her dad's partner. People change...and have secrets. But letting the cops know what she's found is probably smart, in case anything happens to her.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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I think Mitch is safe, but some are not. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi again barb (barbara.wilkey
I noticed that McKenzie has number of maybes of how she can solve who killed Megan got my attention like when she was talking to Mitch or was It Logan? ( got a bit confused if it was Mitch or Logan.
She, may have been pregnant. We don't have that clue
"Sorry, Logan, but it seems there was some drug use. Could be a drug deal gone wrong. Maybe an affair gone
wrong. She may have been pregnant.
Gert
Gert
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Hi again barb (barbara.wilkey
I noticed that McKenzie has number of maybes of how she can solve who killed Megan got my attention like when she was talking to Mitch or was It Logan? ( got a bit confused if it was Mitch or Logan.
She, may have been pregnant. We don't have that clue
"Sorry, Logan, but it seems there was some drug use. Could be a drug deal gone wrong. Maybe an affair gone
wrong. She may have been pregnant.
Gert
Gert
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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There are a lot of things up in the air. They found a pregnancy test kit at Megan's apartment. Thank you for the review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so it's moving along at a nice pace. I really like this story and you've left us on a great cliff hanger. What is to happen now? I'm also looking forward to the romance that is surely on the cards. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Hi Barbara, so it's moving along at a nice pace. I really like this story and you've left us on a great cliff hanger. What is to happen now? I'm also looking forward to the romance that is surely on the cards. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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This romance will take a while to build. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Eight and a half miles is a long way. I'm tired just thinking about it. I'm hungry too after reading about breakfast and donuts. I didn't see any spags in the interesting chapter, my friend~Debbie
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Eight and a half miles is a long way. I'm tired just thinking about it. I'm hungry too after reading about breakfast and donuts. I didn't see any spags in the interesting chapter, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
