Comment from Sallyo

Exceptional

This is a worthy second chapter, and old Aaron is coming into focus as an interesting character. The water dragon was a surprise and I'm hoping it will remember Aaron if they meet again down the track.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019

Thanks for the six! I'm glad you found the second chapter worthy. I'm sure they'll meet again.

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

This is a wonderful story! Demon knew he wanted no part of these eggs. I'm surprised he went with the little dragon in the bucket, but perhaps he understood Aaron was taking it away. I have a feeling there's going to be a lot of excitement with these new little dragons.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019

Thanks for the six! I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. It's the cabin Demon has a problem with. He senses something, and he doesn't want to be anywhere near it.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This was fast!
It's an excellent continuation from the first chapter, and especially a good description of the physique and needs of the dragon. The talking through the shell seemed a little strange to me. I was sure the dragon was actually out, but that theknight couldn't see him for some reason. Good luck for the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019

Glad you liked it. You can hear little chickens peeping through the shell, so I thought the dragon could too, especially since his life depended on it. If most people don't know that and it's too weird I'll change it.

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 22-Sep-2019

I certainly didn't know that, but don't lose it, use it instead (? with a tag or an autor's note citing the similarity)