Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A SALUTE to Grandpa - Chapter 11"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think many lovers married under Heaven during those war years, and God would approve when saying your vows directly to Him. This was such a sweet chapter in the story, and I can understand how hard it would be to watch your newly 'married' husband go off to war not knowing if you would see him again. Well done, you two, another excellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I think many lovers married under Heaven during those war years, and God would approve when saying your vows directly to Him. This was such a sweet chapter in the story, and I can understand how hard it would be to watch your newly 'married' husband go off to war not knowing if you would see him again. Well done, you two, another excellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing Chapter 11 of Love Long Distance. Thank you! Also, thank you for your continued support. We are so happy you found this excellent. :)) Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Cathy & Bill
I recognize immediately Bill's style of writing and I'm amazed at how well you can blend the two styles together. This chapter is indeed sweet. I can clearly see because I kinda know both of you, how it could easily go to a biographical story as well. I enjoyed this chapter, and can see this one is going to be as much a spiritual story as entertainment.
If I could offer anything, it would be that you clearly love, but there isn't much "passion" going on. I do not get the feeling that either of you couldn't live without the other and I believe for a marriage to be real there has to be some of that good old fashion lust & progression of passion. Hope that helps. Good luck! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hello Cathy & Bill
I recognize immediately Bill's style of writing and I'm amazed at how well you can blend the two styles together. This chapter is indeed sweet. I can clearly see because I kinda know both of you, how it could easily go to a biographical story as well. I enjoyed this chapter, and can see this one is going to be as much a spiritual story as entertainment.
If I could offer anything, it would be that you clearly love, but there isn't much "passion" going on. I do not get the feeling that either of you couldn't live without the other and I believe for a marriage to be real there has to be some of that good old fashion lust & progression of passion. Hope that helps. Good luck! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Kiwi! We really appreciate you stopping by to read and review Chapter 11 of Love Long Distance. Thank You! Great comments and we appreciate your input. No worries about the good old fashioned lust & passion, though -- it's there, and we'll share more as we go along. When there's true love, as you say is evident in this story, the intimacy is the VERY BEST! Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again to the dynamic duo, a marvelous Monday to you. I'm loving your spiritual love story. It is engaging and entertaining and grandpa is a hoot, he gives great advice. Nice work my friends.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hello again to the dynamic duo, a marvelous Monday to you. I'm loving your spiritual love story. It is engaging and entertaining and grandpa is a hoot, he gives great advice. Nice work my friends.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hello again, the13poet! This response is being written a day later, so Happy Tuesday to you! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. It means a great deal to both of us. Glad you love Grandpa and found this engaging and entertaining. Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from tfawcus
There is great emotional content in this. I was with you all the way. I perticularly liked the way you presented the grandfather's story and connected it with the main narrative.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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There is great emotional content in this. I was with you all the way. I perticularly liked the way you presented the grandfather's story and connected it with the main narrative.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Tony! Nice to see you again! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, we "SALUTE" you for your continued support. Thank You! Grandpa is awesome--we're glad you like his story. Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Tootie. I am still following and reading and enjoying the story. I like Grandpa's stories and I like the way he always gives advice on living. I'll be back for the next chapter. Robert
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hello Tootie. I am still following and reading and enjoying the story. I like Grandpa's stories and I like the way he always gives advice on living. I'll be back for the next chapter. Robert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Robert! Welcome back! We really appreciate your continued support. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Grandpa's the best! Glad you'll be back for the next chapter. It's in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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You're welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
A very interesting story line which engages me from the start. "Cats Cradle" was one of, and still is one of my favorite by Kurt Vonnegut. You keep the reader wanting more at the end of your chapters.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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A very interesting story line which engages me from the start. "Cats Cradle" was one of, and still is one of my favorite by Kurt Vonnegut. You keep the reader wanting more at the end of your chapters.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi DonandVicki! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. For you say we keep the readers wanting more is such an honor. Thank you, also, for that, and for your continued support. Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written tear jerker chapter you have penned. It made me sad to when I started reading about the tears. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words as well. A very good job you guys! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This is a very well written tear jerker chapter you have penned. It made me sad to when I started reading about the tears. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words as well. A very good job you guys! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Teri! Tears are good for you, so cry away! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. We're happy that you consider it well-written with great descriptive words and very good imagery. Hurrah! Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hi Cathy!
I enjoyed this chapter - especially the part about Grandpa's Native American ancestry and how he and Grandma had to initially secretly marry. One of my favorite college professors was a social worker at Manzanar during WWII, and she fell in love with one of the Japanese
men interred there. They never did marry because of racial prejudice...
and she never married at all...
The pace is fine and informative.
The only thing I would do...and I know I probably shouldn't write this as it may appear offensive...is to find something other than "Goody Goody" for the character of Bill to say. I just cannot reconcile that phrase with a man of his stature...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Cathy!
I enjoyed this chapter - especially the part about Grandpa's Native American ancestry and how he and Grandma had to initially secretly marry. One of my favorite college professors was a social worker at Manzanar during WWII, and she fell in love with one of the Japanese
men interred there. They never did marry because of racial prejudice...
and she never married at all...
The pace is fine and informative.
The only thing I would do...and I know I probably shouldn't write this as it may appear offensive...is to find something other than "Goody Goody" for the character of Bill to say. I just cannot reconcile that phrase with a man of his stature...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Diane! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're glad you enjoyed it and appreciate that you shared what you like best. Thank you also for sharing about your professor. The term "Goody Goody" is very much a part of Bill (we term it Smoky Mountain "Jibber-Jabber), so we've chosen to keep it in, but we do appreciate your input. Chapter 12 is in process and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from GE Parson
Hey Commando & Kathy as a Preacher I appreciate the Biblical references about two becoming one. A piece of legal paper and a preacher's saying, "By the power of such ans such state, I pronounce you husband and wife" now kiss each other and in the sight of God make it so. I of course never ever said that. Anyway excellent write and interesting story. BTW thanks for your service, and glad you came home in one piece. I was too young for Nam, and too old for Korea, but did my 7 yrs in the Ia. ARMY NAT'L GUARD . Parson -Jerry
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hey Commando & Kathy as a Preacher I appreciate the Biblical references about two becoming one. A piece of legal paper and a preacher's saying, "By the power of such ans such state, I pronounce you husband and wife" now kiss each other and in the sight of God make it so. I of course never ever said that. Anyway excellent write and interesting story. BTW thanks for your service, and glad you came home in one piece. I was too young for Nam, and too old for Korea, but did my 7 yrs in the Ia. ARMY NAT'L GUARD . Parson -Jerry
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Jerry! We SALUTE you for the 7 years in the Army National Guard! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your comments are awesome! We're glad you enjoyed it, and hope you'll be back for Chapter 12. It's in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
Darn you, you made me cry again. I should know by now to grab tissues before I start reading. This was a bittersweet chapter for sure. I do hope he returns. I loved Grandma and Grandpas love story and the way you referred to the bible. Very nicely done. See you in chapter 12.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Darn you, you made me cry again. I should know by now to grab tissues before I start reading. This was a bittersweet chapter for sure. I do hope he returns. I loved Grandma and Grandpas love story and the way you referred to the bible. Very nicely done. See you in chapter 12.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Mistydawn! Did you that shedding tears can reduce pain and provide a sense of well-being? In other words, crying is healthy! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for the continued support. We agree--Grandpa is awesome! We love him, too! Glad you'll be back for Chapter 12. It's in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy