Undying Love
Only you will do.26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Well this one brought tears brimming! Such love is immeasurable...as love should be, I think! We can't always define the beginning but w can be comforted in the undeniable truth that it doesn't end!--Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Well this one brought tears brimming! Such love is immeasurable...as love should be, I think! We can't always define the beginning but w can be comforted in the undeniable truth that it doesn't end!--Karenina
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Such true words, Karenina... I am so glad this resonated with you. I was online reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming one of my faves). I read the verse I used in the photo and was mesmerized ~ just had to share. My verse was a foil to show that there is no end to lasting love.
Melissa
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IT hit the softest spot n my heart... Thanks for that.--Karenina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
with the poem included.
-I like your response to it, too.
-You haven't given up, and
your love hasn't died-
you are "simply waiting."
-I think I would probably
wait a little, too!
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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-Very nice artwork
with the poem included.
-I like your response to it, too.
-You haven't given up, and
your love hasn't died-
you are "simply waiting."
-I think I would probably
wait a little, too!
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Hi Pam... thanks so much for your great review!!
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa. Thanks for the tip, too. It was funny!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem about the love for someone very special that will never or fade in our hearts no matter how long we have to wait. We keep hoping even when it seems hopeless.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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A very well-written one-line poem about the love for someone very special that will never or fade in our hearts no matter how long we have to wait. We keep hoping even when it seems hopeless.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra. Thanks so much for the great review.
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
You would have thought that when push kin to shove he would have written one of his own sonnets, would n't you? This is a clever little piece into the bargain.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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You would have thought that when push kin to shove he would have written one of his own sonnets, would n't you? This is a clever little piece into the bargain.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Hahaha... push kin to shove. Hahaha. You are very witty today!! Thank you, Jim... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
Comment from Father Flaps
Shunned? Quite possibly a chump? Loser? Forgotten? A one-way love affair? Waste of time? Yet, we were in love once. I will never forget her. I will be waiting, even when I'm an old man. Love never dies. Her embers will always remember.
Been there, Melissa. Know the feeling well.
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Shunned? Quite possibly a chump? Loser? Forgotten? A one-way love affair? Waste of time? Yet, we were in love once. I will never forget her. I will be waiting, even when I'm an old man. Love never dies. Her embers will always remember.
Been there, Melissa. Know the feeling well.
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Kimbob... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
Pushkin's poem is so sweet, heartfelt. You can feel the undeniable love, the regret of losing his true love. Your poem is a great followup, conclusion to his poem. It's well-written, nicely put. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Pushkin's poem is so sweet, heartfelt. You can feel the undeniable love, the regret of losing his true love. Your poem is a great followup, conclusion to his poem. It's well-written, nicely put. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Misty... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you thought my verse was an appropriate follow on. :)
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Both you and Pushkin write with meaning. Yours was much more succinct. There is always hope in any relationship.
Nice overall presentation.
Mark
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Melissa,
Both you and Pushkin write with meaning. Yours was much more succinct. There is always hope in any relationship.
Nice overall presentation.
Mark
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Mark... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you thought my verse was a good add on. :)
Melissa
Comment from Patty Palmer
Silently, your love waits for you there on some distant plain.
And her love for you shall never wann. A nice thought that a love doesn't go away. They are only waiting.
God bless! "Keep right on writing!:"
Patty
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Silently, your love waits for you there on some distant plain.
And her love for you shall never wann. A nice thought that a love doesn't go away. They are only waiting.
God bless! "Keep right on writing!:"
Patty
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Patty... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you thought my verse was a nice thought. :)
Melissa
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned One Line Poem. The soft and subtle wording creates a cocoon of peaceful reverie for the reader to revel in and savor. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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This is a beautifully penned One Line Poem. The soft and subtle wording creates a cocoon of peaceful reverie for the reader to revel in and savor. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Mark... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Melissa, with your poem response to the letter. Your words read smoothly for this one line poem. You give readers a sense of hope after the narrator realizes that there still is that concept. Love doesn't just disappear forever. Things change, but there is always hope to rekindle love. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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You did a great job, Melissa, with your poem response to the letter. Your words read smoothly for this one line poem. You give readers a sense of hope after the narrator realizes that there still is that concept. Love doesn't just disappear forever. Things change, but there is always hope to rekindle love. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Jan... I was online yesterday reading Russian poets (Pushkin is becoming a favorite) and read this and wanted to share it. I am glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa