Poems
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Damn, Sir Bill -- you've got a tear rolling down my face over here!! ;) :) This is just BEAUTIFUL!! The unsevered thread of love that runs through the generations ... I just can't tell you how your offering has touched me!! Please go directly to your wife and tell her she has to give you a hug because of that big ol' heart and that wonderful pen you wield!! ;) ;) Thank you for this this afternoon.... Gosh, this is just awesome!! ;) Yvette
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Damn, Sir Bill -- you've got a tear rolling down my face over here!! ;) :) This is just BEAUTIFUL!! The unsevered thread of love that runs through the generations ... I just can't tell you how your offering has touched me!! Please go directly to your wife and tell her she has to give you a hug because of that big ol' heart and that wonderful pen you wield!! ;) ;) Thank you for this this afternoon.... Gosh, this is just awesome!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Yvette, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is very creative, Bill. I'm sure most of us love the houses where we grew up. And we miss the time we spent there, because we realize too late that youth is the best part of life. Fact is, no matter how strong the memories may be, we can't go home again, just another harsh fact of life.
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This is very creative, Bill. I'm sure most of us love the houses where we grew up. And we miss the time we spent there, because we realize too late that youth is the best part of life. Fact is, no matter how strong the memories may be, we can't go home again, just another harsh fact of life.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Phyllis, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Mia Twysted
We cannot stay by ourselves in that house if we want to be apart of something special. We must move out and move on and start filling another home, one we have chosen with that person we love.
That is what I take away from this piece.
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We cannot stay by ourselves in that house if we want to be apart of something special. We must move out and move on and start filling another home, one we have chosen with that person we love.
That is what I take away from this piece.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Mia, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very nice and well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and sweet words with neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Bill, This is a very nice and well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and sweet words with neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned poem on the topic of love. I liked the approach you used to express the different stages over time metaphorically. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned poem on the topic of love. I liked the approach you used to express the different stages over time metaphorically. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thanks, MA
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this poem. It is so atmospheric and thought provoking. A very clever write.
The artwork that you have chosen is perfect.
I wish you good luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
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I really like this poem. It is so atmospheric and thought provoking. A very clever write.
The artwork that you have chosen is perfect.
I wish you good luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Jen