Burning Trees
A 3-5-3 poem18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about our life source that starts with trees, which create oxygen so that we can breathe. When we burn down the forests we are to blame for the lack of our life source.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about our life source that starts with trees, which create oxygen so that we can breathe. When we burn down the forests we are to blame for the lack of our life source.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Poignant words here and fire occurs across the globe and causes great devastation to wildlife and to our precious land and the more trees that burn the less oxygen we produce, a fine warming in this nature write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Poignant words here and fire occurs across the globe and causes great devastation to wildlife and to our precious land and the more trees that burn the less oxygen we produce, a fine warming in this nature write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When I see the image of burning trees, I think of the California and Canada fires. Acres and acres of burning trees, acres and acres of burnt ground. It's so sad to hear this kind of news. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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When I see the image of burning trees, I think of the California and Canada fires. Acres and acres of burning trees, acres and acres of burnt ground. It's so sad to hear this kind of news. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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Comment from JudyE
That's an incredible photo and a very descriptive 3-5-3 to go with it. Bushfires are a scourge in our parts and each year they seem to get more and more severe. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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That's an incredible photo and a very descriptive 3-5-3 to go with it. Bushfires are a scourge in our parts and each year they seem to get more and more severe. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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Comment from Susan X Smith
Ooh, this reminds me of all those fires in California. My cousin lost her home, but luckily it was a rental, and no family members were hurt. All those family photos, though.... I enjoyed the read. This image you chose is very striking. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Ooh, this reminds me of all those fires in California. My cousin lost her home, but luckily it was a rental, and no family members were hurt. All those family photos, though.... I enjoyed the read. This image you chose is very striking. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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Comment from Darlene Franklin
A forest fire is a triple tragedy. The loss of trees and the life that lives within the forest, the loss of oxygen consumed by the fire, and the loss of the oxygen the trees might have provided. I've hated forrest fires ever since I first watched Bambi.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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A forest fire is a triple tragedy. The loss of trees and the life that lives within the forest, the loss of oxygen consumed by the fire, and the loss of the oxygen the trees might have provided. I've hated forrest fires ever since I first watched Bambi.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct theme, line and syllable count. The imagery is well executed and paints a poignant picture in the reader's imagination. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct theme, line and syllable count. The imagery is well executed and paints a poignant picture in the reader's imagination. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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Comment from Raul1
I hope that you win the contest. The poem has a very good chance of winning! I like the words that you've written. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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I hope that you win the contest. The poem has a very good chance of winning! I like the words that you've written. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
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You're welcome. :)