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Comment from humpwhistle
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Excellent. Very creative. I'm not sure you disproved anything, but you sure did entertain. Casting Mark David Chapman as an alternate Dr Who was icing on the cake.


Best of luck with the voters.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
    I hope he doesn't create an alternative future in which Time Lords and TARDISes (TARDi?) don't exist. That would be sad. Thanks for the kind comments :) Craig
Comment from the13thpoet
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Happy Friday to you Mr. Richards. Second chances huh? That was a very inventive and imaginative story. I really enjoyed it. I too have often wondered what life would be like if certain people were still alive today. I don't know how I feel about Michael Jackson and Nicholas Cage being married though.....lol. Good job and thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
    Happy Friday to you as well, and thanks for the very kind review. I thought they made a lovely couple lol
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi Craig,

Very nice interpretation of the fact / belief you were given, going full bore with the old space-time continuum. (something I myself am doing currently... whether in reality or not, I won' say!lol)


This makes, bizarrely, perfect sense and I sort of feel that's exactly how it would have played out for the big E.

Great stuff
G

It's a long time since I've blown bubbles. - lol, poor chimp.


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
    Thanks so much for the lovely comments and the glowing rating, Gman. Not to mention sponsoring the contest. If you've got the time travel thing worked out, I want in! Cheers, Craig