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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Exactly there is no confusion, this chapter stands alone, it is so interesting and appealing, romantic sensation is so expressive, after the oral fight, one had to surrender, curious ending; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Exactly there is no confusion, this chapter stands alone, it is so interesting and appealing, romantic sensation is so expressive, after the oral fight, one had to surrender, curious ending; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
This remind me of my wife and I before we got married. She couldn't stand the thought of us having a relationship and me neither. We married for 57 years and had 6 children. I suppose I can see this happening in due time. LOL.
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This remind me of my wife and I before we got married. She couldn't stand the thought of us having a relationship and me neither. We married for 57 years and had 6 children. I suppose I can see this happening in due time. LOL.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
I didn't see any nits so you must have done a great job of introducing any new information. *smile* This chapter didn't have much happening but advanced the story along. Thanks!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Barbara,
I didn't see any nits so you must have done a great job of introducing any new information. *smile* This chapter didn't have much happening but advanced the story along. Thanks!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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It has background information that will be needed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from light
Another great chapter. Looks like a relationship to me. It is just not time to admit it. As usual your dialogue is fitting to the characters and the situation.
Elaine
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Another great chapter. Looks like a relationship to me. It is just not time to admit it. As usual your dialogue is fitting to the characters and the situation.
Elaine
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think this was a very readable chapter. It sounds like real dialogue toward the end especially when they are trying to convince the others there is no exclusive relationship going on. Your character names are great. Thank you so much for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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I think this was a very readable chapter. It sounds like real dialogue toward the end especially when they are trying to convince the others there is no exclusive relationship going on. Your character names are great. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
Great reading, again. Keep up the good work. Glad we have the appropriate reward at hand. One little spag....Logan went into (the)dining room. (From me)Check your messages later.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Great reading, again. Keep up the good work. Glad we have the appropriate reward at hand. One little spag....Logan went into (the)dining room. (From me)Check your messages later.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll fix the missing word.
Comment from royowen
This "no relationship" between between Logan and MacKenzie is beginning to be seen by everyone except by their eyes, I think they are in denial. But we'll see when Mack, finds she will lose Logan, that he has "grown" on her. Well done, good job Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo :( "Better on get home") better get on home? 2; Bill and Logan went into (the) dining room.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This "no relationship" between between Logan and MacKenzie is beginning to be seen by everyone except by their eyes, I think they are in denial. But we'll see when Mack, finds she will lose Logan, that he has "grown" on her. Well done, good job Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo :( "Better on get home") better get on home? 2; Bill and Logan went into (the) dining room.
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the catches. I have made the correction.
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Dear, Barbara, Max doesn't seem to be getting this right. But what to do? Oh, I think he fancies her.
My wife's waiting dinner, and I'm = My wife's waiting with dinner, and I'm
Looking forward to what's next. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Oh, Dear, Barbara, Max doesn't seem to be getting this right. But what to do? Oh, I think he fancies her.
My wife's waiting dinner, and I'm = My wife's waiting with dinner, and I'm
Looking forward to what's next. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, poor Mac. LOL
