Never Give In!
Not going gently...and not listening at all!13 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Yes, my friend. We are all growing older and all that goes with it.The joints hurt, hearing goes and hair turns gray. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Yes, my friend. We are all growing older and all that goes with it.The joints hurt, hearing goes and hair turns gray. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, your review is appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I admire the courage in these words, old age is a challenge that we battle everyday with aches and pains and odd feelings as our bodies age and doesn't function as well as it used to, but where there is life, there is hope, good luck with the contest, your words are much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I admire the courage in these words, old age is a challenge that we battle everyday with aches and pains and odd feelings as our bodies age and doesn't function as well as it used to, but where there is life, there is hope, good luck with the contest, your words are much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Dolly, for your wonderful review.
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
You know I just love you to pieces, right??? And this poem is about loving life and fighting off the dragons that TRY to drag you down, riiiiggghhht?
Well, I think you should go ahead and finish shaping this nonet into a heart.
Yeah, yeah, yeah -- triangle, blah, blah - not hard and fast. Heart is more appropriate here. DARE you! (sing song)
Thanks!!
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Yvette,
You know I just love you to pieces, right??? And this poem is about loving life and fighting off the dragons that TRY to drag you down, riiiiggghhht?
Well, I think you should go ahead and finish shaping this nonet into a heart.
Yeah, yeah, yeah -- triangle, blah, blah - not hard and fast. Heart is more appropriate here. DARE you! (sing song)
Thanks!!
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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LOL! Perhaps after this teacher meeting's done....I feel like a student cheating on the teacher writing you this right now...LOL!! ;) ;)
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Say whaaaat? You're sneaking around, you say??? Don't want to be caught, you say???
Hmmmm? Hate to do this, buddy/friend, but I'll be needing about $395 in FS member dollars along with ...ohhhh?.. how about...18 Lucky Leprechaun Certs and ? ummmm? 7 Banner Supreme Ads. Yep. That oughta do it.
Otherwise, I'll be taking out a billboard right in your hometown and advertising IN TIMES NEW ROMAN, SIZE 1600 FONT, allllll about your little part-time hobby.
Yep - as they say, all's fair in love and war. And writing.
I'll be waiting.
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Go ahead....maybe they'll say they've found a replacement and I can bow out gracefully now... NOPE! Nobody else crazy enough 'round here!! ;); ) LOL! Leaving soon...will look at it maybe tomorrow morning.....I've had enough for the day! Gonna go read one of my trashy romances or something on the front porch! :)
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No! No! No! Wait!!!
Okay... Um... How about $13 in FS member dollars and only 2 LL Certs and 1 Banner Ad???? Surely you can afford that.... For the sake of your rep and alllll????
Come on... you know you wanna......