God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from Enoima Okon
Dear Alcreator,
I promise to say the truth, #smiles.
The truth cannot be changed but can be twisted. You said the truth is not transferable but in my opinion it can be. For example if I established my foundation of dealings based on truthfulness, my generations would likely learn of it and follow suit (I don't know how you see this point of view).
All the same, good piece of poem, well done.
Eno
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Dear Alcreator,
I promise to say the truth, #smiles.
The truth cannot be changed but can be twisted. You said the truth is not transferable but in my opinion it can be. For example if I established my foundation of dealings based on truthfulness, my generations would likely learn of it and follow suit (I don't know how you see this point of view).
All the same, good piece of poem, well done.
Eno
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your reflections about truth. Your use of the dialog form is quite effective and the picture you selected is a very fine match. Have a serene weekend when it arrives- Joan
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I admired your reflections about truth. Your use of the dialog form is quite effective and the picture you selected is a very fine match. Have a serene weekend when it arrives- Joan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like this, coming at it from a universal Mormon point of view. There are in my religious schema very definite truths which are eternal. I like the way you state things. I think instead of "non-transferrable" you mean "non-transferable" but apparently spell-check here says either one.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I like this, coming at it from a universal Mormon point of view. There are in my religious schema very definite truths which are eternal. I like the way you state things. I think instead of "non-transferrable" you mean "non-transferable" but apparently spell-check here says either one.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the review.
You are mistaken, I have used UK English, not US, I thought it was redundant to mention in Author's Notes.
Thanking you once again for your interest in spell-check,
Alcreator Litt Dear
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Ah ha, that UK English is what I probably ought to study in more detail sometime.
Comment from john mallahan
Boy, this sure seems to comment on our current age. If only god is "omnipresent" perhaps, someone should tell our "commander in chief" that it does not apply to him, nor ever will...
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Boy, this sure seems to comment on our current age. If only god is "omnipresent" perhaps, someone should tell our "commander in chief" that it does not apply to him, nor ever will...
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
Comment from Sanku
truth is binding and it is not changeable .that is what it is supposed to be. but these days we see truth being twisted and lies being polished and repeated that they become truth.
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truth is binding and it is not changeable .that is what it is supposed to be. but these days we see truth being twisted and lies being polished and repeated that they become truth.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
God knows the truth already before he asks, look at the example of Cain. God knew he had slain Abel before he asked. When Cain tried to lie hos way out God called him on it.
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God knows the truth already before he asks, look at the example of Cain. God knew he had slain Abel before he asked. When Cain tried to lie hos way out God called him on it.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a thought provoking question posed by the son with thoughtful answers by the father. So we accept that truth exists and that it is unchangeable.
Only one recommendation--In the fourth paragraph I would recommend putting a period after "permanently" and capitalizing "man". Otherwise, I think your punctuation is perfect.
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This is a thought provoking question posed by the son with thoughtful answers by the father. So we accept that truth exists and that it is unchangeable.
Only one recommendation--In the fourth paragraph I would recommend putting a period after "permanently" and capitalizing "man". Otherwise, I think your punctuation is perfect.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, truth is truth it cannot be changed, what is, is, great artwork chosen for these words, I like the continual questions asked by young Daniel, very well done****kahpot
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Very well said, truth is truth it cannot be changed, what is, is, great artwork chosen for these words, I like the continual questions asked by young Daniel, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I didn't like this one as much as the one on Act of God, not because of the content, but because it's harder to follow. And I'm trying to imagine a real child (unless perhaps an adult son who is highly philosophical) asking that kind of question. It reads like a Q&A approach teaching about a topic. If that's what you meant, well done.
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I didn't like this one as much as the one on Act of God, not because of the content, but because it's harder to follow. And I'm trying to imagine a real child (unless perhaps an adult son who is highly philosophical) asking that kind of question. It reads like a Q&A approach teaching about a topic. If that's what you meant, well done.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
If the premise of your story is correct, then why does each culture, religion, and nation have its own set of truths? Perhaps his dad should answer that one. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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If the premise of your story is correct, then why does each culture, religion, and nation have its own set of truths? Perhaps his dad should answer that one. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019