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Lance S. Loria
I prefer rhyme but I enjoyed reading your free verse work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Complimentary artwork enhanced the reading experience. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
Thank you, Lance, for your review.