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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "St. Louis Chapter 9 part 2"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Gail Denham
Sounds like an exciting story in total. I like that you've woven dialog in with action - and put them in a natural setting. Having dogs in the story (they tell me) is always a good touch. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Sounds like an exciting story in total. I like that you've woven dialog in with action - and put them in a natural setting. Having dogs in the story (they tell me) is always a good touch. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from light
Barbara, your dialogue is always so right on. I was amused because my son-in-law used to play for the Cubs. I think it was a field team, but he does have a baseball card. Mac is showing us that she really isn't that tough. Good read.
Elaine
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Barbara, your dialogue is always so right on. I was amused because my son-in-law used to play for the Cubs. I think it was a field team, but he does have a baseball card. Mac is showing us that she really isn't that tough. Good read.
Elaine
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
You did good. No spags and still an engrossing read. You have us all still wanting more. I know it is still a while till the romance but it will be nice when it happens. Drama angle interesting as usual.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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You did good. No spags and still an engrossing read. You have us all still wanting more. I know it is still a while till the romance but it will be nice when it happens. Drama angle interesting as usual.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This really is a mystery, Barbara, I'm wondering if someone is trying to put her off finding Logan's sister's murderer? I can see that all this is not really helping Mac concentrate on it. Thankfully, she has Logan who is not only sympathetic, but I think there might be a romantic buzz in the air. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This really is a mystery, Barbara, I'm wondering if someone is trying to put her off finding Logan's sister's murderer? I can see that all this is not really helping Mac concentrate on it. Thankfully, she has Logan who is not only sympathetic, but I think there might be a romantic buzz in the air. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I think there's a romantic buzz in the air too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sylvia Page
Barbara, that rock thrown at Mac's door is rather frightening, somewhat saying "I'm watching you, be warned!" Whoever it is, also knows that Logan is around protecting her. Another great chapter.
Have a nice day
Sylvia
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Barbara, that rock thrown at Mac's door is rather frightening, somewhat saying "I'm watching you, be warned!" Whoever it is, also knows that Logan is around protecting her. Another great chapter.
Have a nice day
Sylvia
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome!
Comment from Sheridan1
I'm new to the story, Barbara, but I still get a good sense of the characters. You give enough detail for the reader to feel inside the story rather than just reading it.
The last scene is effective, that she is strong enough to try to hold it together but smart enough to let herself be comforted. It leaves the reader with a tender feeling towards both of your characters.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I'm new to the story, Barbara, but I still get a good sense of the characters. You give enough detail for the reader to feel inside the story rather than just reading it.
The last scene is effective, that she is strong enough to try to hold it together but smart enough to let herself be comforted. It leaves the reader with a tender feeling towards both of your characters.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Why would someone risk coming to the house to throw a rock and perhaps be seen? I suspect whoever's out to get Mac is not too bright. Maybe it's Logan's sister's killer trying to stop the investigation. I've always thought murderers are not good at thinking about consequences of their actions. They tend to be rash and acting on impulse and emotion. Throwing a rock would be the kind of thing such a person would do, I think.
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Why would someone risk coming to the house to throw a rock and perhaps be seen? I suspect whoever's out to get Mac is not too bright. Maybe it's Logan's sister's killer trying to stop the investigation. I've always thought murderers are not good at thinking about consequences of their actions. They tend to be rash and acting on impulse and emotion. Throwing a rock would be the kind of thing such a person would do, I think.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. Many neighbors, especially in the large cities believe mind your own business is the most important survival tactic, especially in St. Louis. Nobody would be watching. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
Here I am again, jumping into one of your stories in the midst
of things. I will make every effort to go back and read what I've
missed, to this point. The profiles you provide do give one a
guide, however.
I've only been back 3 days after almost a year away. Looking for
my muse. If you see her, would you send her my way?
Good to be reading you again.
jan
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Barbara:
Here I am again, jumping into one of your stories in the midst
of things. I will make every effort to go back and read what I've
missed, to this point. The profiles you provide do give one a
guide, however.
I've only been back 3 days after almost a year away. Looking for
my muse. If you see her, would you send her my way?
Good to be reading you again.
jan
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I am sure you will quickly find your muse. Thank you for reading and I can't wait to read your work.
