Harsh Words Hurt The Hearers
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Harsh words spoken can sometime so harshly affect a listener that he or she may even want to die; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Harsh words spoken can sometime so harshly affect a listener that he or she may even want to die; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for a nice review.
Comment from Sugarray77
You have done a great job in expressing this to us, Patricia. The behavior we adapt to in childhood stays with us throughout our lives. Great job on the format and content of this double verse.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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You have done a great job in expressing this to us, Patricia. The behavior we adapt to in childhood stays with us throughout our lives. Great job on the format and content of this double verse.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for a nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Never argue with an angry person because they are often irrational and it is best not to enter into conversation in order to keep safe. But an angry person is often angry with themselves rather than others and is blaming the world for the way they feel and this is probably what your father did to you. Understanding the behaviour helps to put it into perspective. Your words are poignant Patricia, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Never argue with an angry person because they are often irrational and it is best not to enter into conversation in order to keep safe. But an angry person is often angry with themselves rather than others and is blaming the world for the way they feel and this is probably what your father did to you. Understanding the behaviour helps to put it into perspective. Your words are poignant Patricia, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for a nice review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. Good job on the style used. I like the two verse as verse one sets the scene and verse two shows the results of those harsh words. You are right. all of us need to think before we speak because those words cannot be unheard. This is your spaceship style, right? Thank for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. Good job on the style used. I like the two verse as verse one sets the scene and verse two shows the results of those harsh words. You are right. all of us need to think before we speak because those words cannot be unheard. This is your spaceship style, right? Thank for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for a nice review.