Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the Club Challenge splendidly. While many of us gave the man a personality and profession, you chose to keep him a mystery. It is a clever way to approach it. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Than you for a super review
Hugs, Trisha
Have a strong happy week

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice presentation, Trisha.
-This is a very well written
poem for the challenge.
-I like how you address
many features you think about
as you viewed it.
-You also build suspense
about it with "Interest builds."
-The detail and description
is excellent, like whether or not
he sings, and it being an
"artist's rendition."
-A very good conclusion, too.
-Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Than you for a super review
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Jul-2019

You are very welcome, Trisha. I am curious whether you publish your work or just share it on FS.

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

I am trying to publish, don?t know how. Thanks for your compliment

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Jul-2019

You are welcome. I sent you a private message.