The Sliding Board Caper
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
daddies have a talent for playing the clown for their little girls. My daddy was so much fun and a real friend when he became my dad. I was so lucky. This is a great story. I saw no spags or nits. Well done, Yvonne. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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daddies have a talent for playing the clown for their little girls. My daddy was so much fun and a real friend when he became my dad. I was so lucky. This is a great story. I saw no spags or nits. Well done, Yvonne. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Nancy. My daddy was a lot of fun.
Comment from MsPetra
I really enjoyed your poem. It's a little slice of life.
You did a good job with your form, you held true there. I mostly appreciated the simplicity of it.
There isn't anything I would change.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I really enjoyed your poem. It's a little slice of life.
You did a good job with your form, you held true there. I mostly appreciated the simplicity of it.
There isn't anything I would change.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from misscookie
I like t the words to your poem and the photo is a perfect match
as a child I feared height and still do now, yet I didn't let my siblings know down the slide I went
It's so nice when you can remember pleasant memories you shared with your dad
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I like t the words to your poem and the photo is a perfect match
as a child I feared height and still do now, yet I didn't let my siblings know down the slide I went
It's so nice when you can remember pleasant memories you shared with your dad
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank YOU for reviewing. 8-) The slide wasn't nearly as high as I remembered it. hahahaha
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Your very welcome
take care
cookie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It sounds like your dad
might have been the
type to have a little fun
once in awhile.
-I enjoyed this poem that
recalled a fond memory for you.
-It is written well, and the
repeating lines are very good.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It sounds like your dad
might have been the
type to have a little fun
once in awhile.
-I enjoyed this poem that
recalled a fond memory for you.
-It is written well, and the
repeating lines are very good.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That brought back so memories, Yvonne, not only of my own but what I would do with my boys, I used to love that bump in the middle and so did they. I enjoyed this poetry form, too, I'm going to be writing a bit more myself so want to try a few of these new(ish) styles. You have written a lovely poem, my friend, I really enjoyed reading it. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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That brought back so memories, Yvonne, not only of my own but what I would do with my boys, I used to love that bump in the middle and so did they. I enjoyed this poetry form, too, I'm going to be writing a bit more myself so want to try a few of these new(ish) styles. You have written a lovely poem, my friend, I really enjoyed reading it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for this wonderful review! Funny how the slide wasn't has high as I remember it. hahahaha
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I'm shrinking, so the slide is beginning to grow again! lol. xxx
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That's so true. I've lost an inch in the last year. I plan to live to be 102, so I've figured if I lose an inch a year, I'll only be 33 inches tall when I'm 102.
Looking forward to your posts.
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LOL!!! We could then get away with a child's fare on the buses or taxis! Planes, even!! lol. Mind you, at 102, everyone will be falling over themselves trying to find out our secret! :))
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Hadn't thought of that. Maybe we should think of charging admission.
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LOL!! You are so funny, Yvonne, love you to bits. :)) xx
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Back atcha! 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sevenelle about the sliding board and the father who has a great senie of humor to entertain his children in the park with a fruit in his mouth to make them laugh and a memory for life.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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A very well-written Sevenelle about the sliding board and the father who has a great senie of humor to entertain his children in the park with a fruit in his mouth to make them laugh and a memory for life.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Yes, he did. Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was really cute and I love how your dad was just putting on a show for you. I like the rhyming it made the story bouncy. I like the picture it help visualize the whole story.
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This was really cute and I love how your dad was just putting on a show for you. I like the rhyming it made the story bouncy. I like the picture it help visualize the whole story.
Patty
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
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You're welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, obviously a dear memory here as you have remembered this and wrote a poem about it, I love the form and you made this humorous, love Dolly x
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He he he, obviously a dear memory here as you have remembered this and wrote a poem about it, I love the form and you made this humorous, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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It's one of my favorite memories. Funny how the slide wasn't as high as I remembered it. hahaha
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh, so that's what a sliding board looks like. And what a fantastic show your dad put on for you.
This is a really form, that one day I shall give a try. And your metre and rhyme as is your signature you in fine form.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Oh, so that's what a sliding board looks like. And what a fantastic show your dad put on for you.
This is a really form, that one day I shall give a try. And your metre and rhyme as is your signature you in fine form.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate that. It's funny how the slide wasn't as high as I remembered it. hahahaha
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Sliding Board Caper", is an extremely well-written, delightfully descriptive and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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"The Sliding Board Caper", is an extremely well-written, delightfully descriptive and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Duchess. I'm glad you liked it.
