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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "God Gives Me Everything!"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from Pj Dennison
Your poem is excellent. I call it a prayer poem. Thank you for sharing this most intimate conversation with our God. As I read your poem I realize that your words become my prayers and perhaps this is the purpose of this poem. The repeated verse goes into my heart and soul,
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Your poem is excellent. I call it a prayer poem. Thank you for sharing this most intimate conversation with our God. As I read your poem I realize that your words become my prayers and perhaps this is the purpose of this poem. The repeated verse goes into my heart and soul,
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of poetry concerning faith dear anonymous! I think you have successfully managed to convey your inner feelings and your relationship with god.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry concerning faith dear anonymous! I think you have successfully managed to convey your inner feelings and your relationship with god.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you continue to be compelled to write every day. Whether it is a "Secret Plan" or not thank you for sharing your divine inspiration with us. Warm regards- Joan
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I am glad you continue to be compelled to write every day. Whether it is a "Secret Plan" or not thank you for sharing your divine inspiration with us. Warm regards- Joan
Comment Written 23-May-2020
Comment from Louise Michelle
I think I enjoyed reading your notes even more than the poem, although it certainly is well written and powerful. We are all God's children and should celebrate our differences. Hugs, Lou
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I think I enjoyed reading your notes even more than the poem, although it certainly is well written and powerful. We are all God's children and should celebrate our differences. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Great to write it is! Every day, I get, find and receive anything or everything as God finds that I only deserve for so, He gives or sends me that thing", because it expresses gratitude to God for providing your needs!
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My favorite part was, "Great to write it is! Every day, I get, find and receive anything or everything as God finds that I only deserve for so, He gives or sends me that thing", because it expresses gratitude to God for providing your needs!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think you wrote a great and well written poem. It is very truthful and must needed poem for everyone to read. God does supply what we need to live. God is so great and amazing. God can do anything. Thank you for sharing. God bless You!
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I think you wrote a great and well written poem. It is very truthful and must needed poem for everyone to read. God does supply what we need to live. God is so great and amazing. God can do anything. Thank you for sharing. God bless You!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Your faith shines; though God's knowing what's best for you is a familiar theme often tritely expressed, you convey your fervor in this regard in a fresher way than is often seen. Cheers. LIZ
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Your faith shines; though God's knowing what's best for you is a familiar theme often tritely expressed, you convey your fervor in this regard in a fresher way than is often seen. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your well-chosen words paired with a great picture to accompany them. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. You are wise to believe that God is in control everyday and will give to us what He knows we need when we need it. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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I like your well-chosen words paired with a great picture to accompany them. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. You are wise to believe that God is in control everyday and will give to us what He knows we need when we need it. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from susand3022
Hi Alcreator, I really liked the conceptualization of your poem and I appreciate that you don't address any one religion in particular. I did find the ending of your third line a little awkward... "...or He thinks that would worth for my living." I'm not sure if you missed a word, if there's a typo, or if FS mixed things around on you when you posted...(it did that to my last poem... it was a bizarre mess! I had two 4's before I realized...) In any case, take a gander at it. :)
I really liked the ideas you presented in your poem :)
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Hi Alcreator, I really liked the conceptualization of your poem and I appreciate that you don't address any one religion in particular. I did find the ending of your third line a little awkward... "...or He thinks that would worth for my living." I'm not sure if you missed a word, if there's a typo, or if FS mixed things around on you when you posted...(it did that to my last poem... it was a bizarre mess! I had two 4's before I realized...) In any case, take a gander at it. :)
I really liked the ideas you presented in your poem :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Ben Colder
Must agree with the poet. God is not religious, but righteous. I marvel at your wording and find nothing wrong and find them strong and very worthy. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy your life,it is a gift.
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Must agree with the poet. God is not religious, but righteous. I marvel at your wording and find nothing wrong and find them strong and very worthy. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy your life,it is a gift.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020