Dear Lover...
2nd Place in 3 Line Poetry Contest/July 14, 201929 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautifully articulated love poem, presented as artfully in both verse and imagery, and in perfect compliance with contest direction. I wish this talented writer best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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In my opinion, a beautifully articulated love poem, presented as artfully in both verse and imagery, and in perfect compliance with contest direction. I wish this talented writer best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments and generous stars! Im so happy you enjoyed.
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You are so welcome, Diana, my pleasure - please excuse my typo - the word should have been "talented"...Eve
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No worry! I type on a phone and often my fingers hit many letters I don?t intend to put!! I am for ever writing fir instead of for! LoL
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Thank you for your understanding, Diana, and prompt reply, especially since I do proof everything I write and still manage to "goof." Your reason is far more legitimate, but I do feel vindicated, thanks to you...Eve
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:) xoxo
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Ditto...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice use of word economy in this steamy 5-7-7, 3-line contest entry, Diana.
This could just as easily have been spoken by either of these two lovers, both male and female alike.
I especially liked the last line, "of sweet velvet caresses".
Very alluring and well worded.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Nice use of word economy in this steamy 5-7-7, 3-line contest entry, Diana.
This could just as easily have been spoken by either of these two lovers, both male and female alike.
I especially liked the last line, "of sweet velvet caresses".
Very alluring and well worded.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks my friend! It is truly a challenge to try to write in such a defined structure! You?d think I wrote the poem for the picture so you can imagine my excitement (no pun intended lol) when I found the picture :). I appreciate that you enjoyed this!
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a great match
Your words capture the loo in their face express their love for each other forever
boy I remember looking into my honey's eye that way many years ago.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a great match
Your words capture the loo in their face express their love for each other forever
boy I remember looking into my honey's eye that way many years ago.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you Miss cookie I pray all the world would be able to have such love in their life too!
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I do also I had been bless to have it for twenty-two years
Have a nice evening
Cookie
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And you also!
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peace God be with you
cookie
Comment from Ronni
Wow! a fathomless passion, ocean depth deep, enveloped and enraptured
in endless 'velvet kisses', most profoundly and enticingly captured in
this 3 line poem! Fantastic write! Sensual and sensational!
Best wishes in contest!
Always, Ronni
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Wow! a fathomless passion, ocean depth deep, enveloped and enraptured
in endless 'velvet kisses', most profoundly and enticingly captured in
this 3 line poem! Fantastic write! Sensual and sensational!
Best wishes in contest!
Always, Ronni
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you dear friend! I could not believe that I found that picture to match so perfectly with my poem! It is quite a challenge to bring a complete idea into existence with such a limiting structure to work with! I?m going over shortly to read your new one! :) xoxo
Comment from Sylvia Page
Passion consumes me;
I am lost in an ocean
of sweet velvet caresses.
Perfect in syllable count and a perfect picture of love that's meant to be as God wanted it to be.
Good artwork. Best wishes in the contest.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Passion consumes me;
I am lost in an ocean
of sweet velvet caresses.
Perfect in syllable count and a perfect picture of love that's meant to be as God wanted it to be.
Good artwork. Best wishes in the contest.
Sylvia
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! That?s exactly how I feel about it too! Passion that comes from the way God designed it not just because it?s a physical thing! Thank you for seeing it in that very beautiful way!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-writen three-line poem about the passion between two lovers can consumes us like being lost in an ocean of sweet velvet caresses. We cannot resist a lover's attention.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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A very well-writen three-line poem about the passion between two lovers can consumes us like being lost in an ocean of sweet velvet caresses. We cannot resist a lover's attention.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for stopping in reading and your awesome comment. I believe this is the tender way God intended for love to be between a man and a woman.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Hello Diana
I admire your passionate soul. Love embraces every word of your poem. I feel the love from a distance spoken humbly with three lines. Thanks, for sharing your gift.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hello Diana
I admire your passionate soul. Love embraces every word of your poem. I feel the love from a distance spoken humbly with three lines. Thanks, for sharing your gift.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much and I appreciate your comment. It blesses my heart that you can see that I believe passion is about love and not just a physical thing.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa --that's steamy-hot!! I had to sit here and fan myself a moment before being able to write this review!! Great artwork you found to accompany it, too. This is going to do great things in the 3 Line Poetry Contest!! Good luck to you, you little minx! xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Whoa --that's steamy-hot!! I had to sit here and fan myself a moment before being able to write this review!! Great artwork you found to accompany it, too. This is going to do great things in the 3 Line Poetry Contest!! Good luck to you, you little minx! xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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LoL! Yeah baby I?m burning down the Fanstory house! Haha! Thanks so much for your always wonderful comments! You got me laughing out loud! I almost put it an adult warning on it before I posted! Haha!!
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hahaha.
Comment from Ogden
A very romantic poem about your amorous relationship, with an appropriately passionate illustration. (I think you may have gilded the lily, by overreaching for that new adjective.)
Good luck in the contest, Diana!
Don
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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A very romantic poem about your amorous relationship, with an appropriately passionate illustration. (I think you may have gilded the lily, by overreaching for that new adjective.)
Good luck in the contest, Diana!
Don
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! I?m very appreciative of your awesome comment!
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You;re most welcome, Diana.
Don
Comment from Josh Walters
I'm finding it can be harder to judge the shorter contests. I love this visual and thought it was hard to present the reader with a good image in only three lines. You did it excellently. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I'm finding it can be harder to judge the shorter contests. I love this visual and thought it was hard to present the reader with a good image in only three lines. You did it excellently. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! You are so right! this is my first attempt at trying to convey a message in only three lines. I admire the poets on this site that can come up with stuff in a heartbeat. LoL!