God's poetry
keeping the awesome gifts of GOD30 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful prayer-poem filled with positive images and well wishes for poets sharing their hearts and souls through their love of writing. I enjoyed reading this very much.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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This is a beautiful prayer-poem filled with positive images and well wishes for poets sharing their hearts and souls through their love of writing. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much Spangle for your lovely review and stars, so very sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You're very welcome, Vance!
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Thank you so much Spangle! So much appreciate your message@ Vance
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Thanks so much Spangle, for your lovely review and stars so joyfully now upon my banner!
HIS GRAYNESSS; Vance
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Thank you so sincerely for your lovely review and stars, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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so many thanks indeed! Vance
Comment from Bill Pinder
"Leaving not one drop of love behind" is a great phrase. Thanks for sharing this excellent writing that is motivated from your love for God and others. Happy holiday!
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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"Leaving not one drop of love behind" is a great phrase. Thanks for sharing this excellent writing that is motivated from your love for God and others. Happy holiday!
Bill
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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thank you so much Bill, for your lovely review and generous stars! sorry to take so long in contacting you ?. been up to fits with computer trouble! please stay tuned, great to hear from you! Vance
Comment from JLR
Very well developed poem, Excellent rhythm and a strong faith based message, thank you for sharing this on this wonderful US Holiday. Continued success!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Very well developed poem, Excellent rhythm and a strong faith based message, thank you for sharing this on this wonderful US Holiday. Continued success!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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thanks so much JLR, for your excellent review, so sincerely appreciated! hoping to hear from you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You will write poems in love, for love, by love and with love, and use all words that God gifts from His infinite poems and whatever you will get from heaven and all that God speaks through His poem; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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You will write poems in love, for love, by love and with love, and use all words that God gifts from His infinite poems and whatever you will get from heaven and all that God speaks through His poem; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much Alcreator for your lovely review and stars so very sincerely appreciated! I hope you will stay tuned always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from kahpot
I love this read it flows and continues very well, God's poetry is every where we only need to look and listen, and as your beautiful words say- take it all in and onboard, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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I love this read it flows and continues very well, God's poetry is every where we only need to look and listen, and as your beautiful words say- take it all in and onboard, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much kahpot, for your lovely review and great stars, so very appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from susand3022
Hello Vance, What a beautiful sentiment for a Sunday morning. I can use a little peaceful thought today as I'm sitting here with a very cranky 3-year-old. Cranky about absolutely nothing. She wants nothing... needs nothing... will say nothing but "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" at the top of her lungs, to every suggestion and closes herself in my bathroom and throws tantrums. What a day. LOL
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Hello Vance, What a beautiful sentiment for a Sunday morning. I can use a little peaceful thought today as I'm sitting here with a very cranky 3-year-old. Cranky about absolutely nothing. She wants nothing... needs nothing... will say nothing but "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" at the top of her lungs, to every suggestion and closes herself in my bathroom and throws tantrums. What a day. LOL
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much susand3022 for your lovely review, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering this evening, Vance -- just love the thought of Creation being a poem written just for us!! ;) ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, changing your formatting just a bit [I only changed your words on one line!] Here's just a suggestion... I think folks will be able to appreciate your rhythm and your AWESOME vision a lot better! :) ;) Thanx for sharing - Yvette :)
Oh, how I love GOD,S poetry,
I take it everywhere with me
It makes me sing and always smile
It lets me relax and enjoy life for awhile
I see softness written in the clouds
Until its passions yell out loud
to chase birds and butterflies in hide and seek,
where only words from heaven speak.
They always call me to Take pause
and realize that they have a cause
that's meant to lead me to new awakenings
that will guide my mind to new and wonderful things.
That any good poet should understand
and hope they'll be shared well, by that poet's hand.
So now I work to meet that goal
for it's now locked within my heart and soul.
Of course, I hope my skills will serve to deliver
all the words and thoughts that run like a river,
in my heart and in my mind,
leaving not one drop of love behind.
Amen.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A beautiful offering this evening, Vance -- just love the thought of Creation being a poem written just for us!! ;) ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, changing your formatting just a bit [I only changed your words on one line!] Here's just a suggestion... I think folks will be able to appreciate your rhythm and your AWESOME vision a lot better! :) ;) Thanx for sharing - Yvette :)
Oh, how I love GOD,S poetry,
I take it everywhere with me
It makes me sing and always smile
It lets me relax and enjoy life for awhile
I see softness written in the clouds
Until its passions yell out loud
to chase birds and butterflies in hide and seek,
where only words from heaven speak.
They always call me to Take pause
and realize that they have a cause
that's meant to lead me to new awakenings
that will guide my mind to new and wonderful things.
That any good poet should understand
and hope they'll be shared well, by that poet's hand.
So now I work to meet that goal
for it's now locked within my heart and soul.
Of course, I hope my skills will serve to deliver
all the words and thoughts that run like a river,
in my heart and in my mind,
leaving not one drop of love behind.
Amen.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much Yvette for your lovely review and stars and so sorry to be so long in responding, please forgive me! Vance
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No worries, Vance -- take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
This prose poem uses metaphor, imagery and internal rhyme to remind us that writers are meant to be inspired to write about the beauty of nature and the peace it brings. It tells us of the simplicity of the world and how hard it is to find the right words to express it.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This prose poem uses metaphor, imagery and internal rhyme to remind us that writers are meant to be inspired to write about the beauty of nature and the peace it brings. It tells us of the simplicity of the world and how hard it is to find the right words to express it.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Joan, for your lovely review and stars, deeply appreciated! Vance
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You are most kindly welcome, Vance.
Joan
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Thanks so much Joan and so sorry to take so long to say so..please forgive me! Vance
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You are most kindly welcome, Vance.
No apologies necessary.
Comment from judiverse
What lovely thoughts you express in this. You have such insight into what the poet hopes to achieve. He or she looks about and sees the beauty in the world, beauty that comes from God. The poet's desire is to share these thoughts and feelings with others, and to express those insights with love. Your rhyme and imagery are so beautiful. I wish you would not crowd your words on the page but separate your lines so we can appreciate the rhyme as we read it. Follow Rama's advice! judi
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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What lovely thoughts you express in this. You have such insight into what the poet hopes to achieve. He or she looks about and sees the beauty in the world, beauty that comes from God. The poet's desire is to share these thoughts and feelings with others, and to express those insights with love. Your rhyme and imagery are so beautiful. I wish you would not crowd your words on the page but separate your lines so we can appreciate the rhyme as we read it. Follow Rama's advice! judi
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much judi, for your lovely review and stars, greatly appreciated always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You are quite welcome. I see that this is a very popular poem. judi
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Oh My very deep and sincere thanks for your lovely review and stars, so greatly appreciated! Vance
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem inspired by God is always uplifting and encouraging to the poet as well as the readers and everyone is winning at the end.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem inspired by God is always uplifting and encouraging to the poet as well as the readers and everyone is winning at the end.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you Sandra, for your wonderful review and stars, so very deeply appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance